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Description EDIT: 1st of February 2018: I didn't change much from the story, only the fact Poppypetal wasn't expecting kits during the battle over a new territory. 
EDIT: 31st of October 2021: Fixed some grammar errors, jesus I can't read this  

Well as you may know I uploaded a storyboard on my YT channel, and quite a lot of people are interested to know more about the story! So here it is! Excuse me if you'll see grammar mistakes, English is not my native language
And also I'm really bad at writing ahahaha

Story: 
It all started a long time ago, where once a clan that lived in peace, was startled by a 'disease' that was spreading through the forest in a surprisingly high speed. By that disease I mean rabies, every third or so prey was rabid and thus dangerous. The same goes for foxes that are far more dangerous to cats than a hare. The clan's leader later presumably died when he and fellow clanmates tried to save his clan from a rabid fox. He wasn't heavily wounded, but he was bitten which meant that sooner or later he would turn into an aggressive beast. The medicine cats thought they could help him, so they kept him alive and tried to save him. One day, during the deepest of nights the wounded leader sneaked away from the clan's territory and he was never seen again. 
The next day Brightnight became the new leader, Brightstar. Brightstar made Gullwing his deputy. During a meeting, he said that they would be moving from their territory to find a new one. Brightstar said that they would attack anyone to claim any territory they find as their own. A few cats politely disagreed with him, as it was not moral to attack other clans to claim their territory, but the rest of the clan cats were pleased and excited. Brightstar didn't listen to those who disagreed with him. He didn't want to, he believed that there will be always a sacrifice, even if it's not fair. 
After a long journey through fields and twoleg-place they found a forest. Brightstar sent out two cats to investigate the forest and, as it was expected, there was already a clan. At the edge of the forest, Brightstar started to tell his plan; they would attack during moon high, when the clan was most vulnerable, and so that happened. Innocent blood was spilled. Brightstar did not want any cat from the other clan alive. Everyone went by the rule but then, here goes Dirtpool. After fighting and killing he finds a she-cat with her kits. She was scared and hissing all over the place. He retracted his claws and tried to calm her down, after a long time arguing over whether she should trust him, she takes two of the three kits and runs away with the help of Dirtpool. He was relieved when he thought nobody noticed but he was wrong, three cats sprinted in the direction where the queen ran. Moments later he heard the she-cat screaming, so loudly that he felt like he was right in front of the brutal scene, a shiver ran down his spine. He noticed his Gullwing's disappointed expression. When Dirtpool looked away from his eyes that were piercing through his flesh, he noticed the third kit the she-cat hadn’t taken with her. Before he could do anything, he was attacked, fighting for his own life he forgot about the kit.
The fight was over, Brightstar won with his clan, not everyone cheered but everyone was glad the fight was over. Gullwing then heard a sudden squeaking coming from the nursery, even other cats started to notice. Dirtpool instantly regretted his stupidity, realizing he forgot about the kitten. He rushed over to Gullwing as he approached the nursery, he begged Gullwing to not kill the small kit. Dirtpool told Gullwing that he would take care of the kit but Gullwing didn't listen, it was almost like he didn't hear him at all. Gullwing took the kitten from the nursery and places it on the ground. Dirtpool and Gullwing were about to get into a fight when Brightstar stepped in. Without a second thought he snapped the kit's spine with his jaws, the squawking was over and Dirtpool felt more disgusted than ever. He felt horrible but that emotion quickly turned into hatred towards his own leader. No one said a word, everyone was utterly shocked.

It was a few moons since the incident, everyone in the clan was living a quiet, normal life. Dirtpool became a father and didn't think about anything else other than the kits and his mate. 
News spread through the clan that twolegs were cutting down trees from the forest. Twolegs were taking over their habitat, and once again the clan was in danger. Prey started to be harder to find. Everyone was suggesting to their leader that they should move and find a new place again, but Brightstar refused, he didn't want to leave the territory that he proudly fought for. Anyone who tried to flee was immediately killed by the paw of their leader.
Food started to be even more scarce to find, there was nothing left, every leftover or crowfood was appreciated at the time, cats started to fight for every piece of meal. Even Dirtpool got once into a fight over a hare. 
Dirtpool tried to spend as much time as possible outside of the clan, sometimes he found a hare, sometimes he found a rat but most of the time he didn't find anything. 
One time when he was hunting with Gullwing he stumbled upon some road kill, a kittypet. He hadn't eaten in such a long time, he gave all the food he ever found to his mate. He walked to the dead cat and started to feed on it out of desperation. Suddenly Dirtpool stopped when he realised what he was doing. It was not normal, it was not what he was supposed to be doing, but once he was in, he couldn't stop. it didn't taste different from other things he has ever eaten. He was violently pushed away from the dead body by Gullwing. They both started to argue, while Gullwing was questioning his Dirtpool's sanity, Dirtpool told him that he had a plan.
A promise was made, Gullwing's mouth would be sealed, on the condition that if Dirtpool killed a clanmate he would be exiled for good and he would never get to see his mate or kits ever again. 
Some time passed and Dirtpool was doing quite good, he gained weight and kept his family alive. They didn't know what they were eating. Dirtpool couldn’t think of any good lie to tell his mate, so he just told her that he was stealing it from twolegs. 
One time while Dirtpool was eating all alone, away from the clan territory, he spotted Bunnykit. She was staring at him like a beaten-up dog and, because he felt sorry for her, he gave her the entire piece of bloodied meat he had been eating. Bunnykit thanked him and lied down. Dirtpool and Bunnykit talked about various things while Bunnykit feasted on a chunk of juicy cat meat. 
- summary of the video - 
Dirtpool had been searching for food- for normal food, like mice etc., when suddenly, he saw Raspberrypelt. He didn't look pleased at all, he looked angry and disgusted. As he was getting closer to Dirtpool he spat out various of ugly words, he called Dirtpool disgusting, that what he's doing is immoral. Then he finally said that he saw what Dirtpool did, he saw him eating another cat. It caught Dirtpool by surprise when Raspberrypelt told him that he was going to stop him, Raspberrypelt didn't want to let Dirtpool to attack and feast on his own clanmates. Dirtpool was trying to tell him that nothing like that is going to happen. Raspberrypelt lost his temper from his 'lies' and attacked Dirtpool. Raspberrypelt was surprisingly strong, Dirtpool thought that he was just skin and bones but there was something else to it. It was the determination, the hatred, the disgust that led Raspberrypelt to such strength, but the fight didn't last long, and Raspberrypelt was killed.
Dirtpool couldn't hold himself back and began to feast on Raspberrypelt. Sure, Dirtpool had a large supply of food, but it was always difficult to get that food. He didn’t go to the twoleg-place and kill like a maniac, it took hours upon hours before he found the right target. Before he kills his prey, he befriends the unsuspecting kittypet and lures them away from the twolegs place so no other kittypet sees him when he kills them. 
Then there’s Bunnypaw, she was behind a tree the whole time, watching, and Dirtpool notices her. He stopped eating Raspberrypelt and tried to explain to her everything that was going on while he was 'pretending' that he wanted to kill her. Of course, they get into a fight, when he bites into her neck, he stops right away, telling her that if he really wanted to, she would've been dead. Dirtpool also says that he doesn't behave the way Bunnypaw thinks he behaves. Dirtpool keeps repeating that everything that he does is for the sake of his mate and his kits.
And then here goes Gullwing who interrupts Dirtpool's emotional outburst.

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Comments: 64

SnakestarStuff [2022-01-25 06:41:37 +0000 UTC]

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LoopyDoop923 [2021-11-11 05:20:13 +0000 UTC]

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MONOArtzUwU [2021-11-05 10:06:42 +0000 UTC]

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SafulousArt In reply to MONOArtzUwU [2021-11-05 14:24:32 +0000 UTC]

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DreamChaserWolfChild [2021-07-21 23:07:06 +0000 UTC]

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TurtleDrawsDragons [2020-12-19 04:37:45 +0000 UTC]

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SafulousArt In reply to TurtleDrawsDragons [2020-12-19 18:16:48 +0000 UTC]

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readforcertainthings [2020-08-07 03:44:40 +0000 UTC]

The famine was definitely a starclan punishment

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Dawn13567 In reply to readforcertainthings [2021-07-23 01:51:44 +0000 UTC]

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Chipmunqq [2020-04-18 23:21:46 +0000 UTC]

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Aliy1365 [2020-02-28 22:13:00 +0000 UTC]

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FightingGirlArt [2019-09-18 17:21:43 +0000 UTC]

I am intrigued. 

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MiloCloodie [2019-01-24 23:07:41 +0000 UTC]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ok...

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TypicalKitten1 [2019-01-07 01:59:24 +0000 UTC]

I am extremely uncomfortable 

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Jay-Wolf-Hybrid [2018-04-22 23:46:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry if this has an obvious answer, but did Dirtpool end up being exiled? Or because Raspberrypelt started the fight will he somehow stay because he didn't originally intend to kill and eat Raspberrypelt?

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StarriiArii In reply to Jay-Wolf-Hybrid [2018-04-28 19:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Dirtpool probably ends up exiled. He made a deal with Gullwing to not kill a Clanmate and eat them but Gullwing caught him in the act and he's probably exiled.

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anthroFANfromHEAVEN [2018-02-24 17:21:46 +0000 UTC]

i love your awsome art and story of dirtpool, i litteraly watch the storyboard every day. keep up the good work!

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truble-inmy-paradise [2018-01-05 05:22:39 +0000 UTC]

holy shit duude, that's so freaking heavy but I'm in love with the video + your song choice.  It sounds like you put a lot of thought and creativity into the story too.  Like, the complexity of Dirtpool so that he's yeah, doing morally and ethically wrong things, but it's out of desperation and he still has humanity towards others of his clan and loves his mate + kits like,,, I'm emotional. 
(also hello from youtube rabbit trails in 2018 lol)

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Slinky-Noodle [2017-11-28 01:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Hooo damn this is heavy

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LunaWolf103 [2017-11-13 05:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Oooohh.. that's what happens. Makes SO much more sense now! I mean, I caught on to the basics, but this clears everything up. Especially the ending

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Heldoryn [2017-11-11 19:02:02 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore this. The video was very well drawn and the story itself is amazing. It is so hard to construct a good character when it comes to cannibalism, and you worked it out wonderfully. 
I'm astonished. It's one of my favourite videos <3

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Maplepiee [2017-10-29 22:37:54 +0000 UTC]

I love how well written this gory, depressing story is, especially the promise. I've read this many times, and just now noticed that the promise does come into play: Dirtpool said he wouldn't kill or eat his clan mates, and there he is, right in front of gullwing. I love this story so so much, it's just so well written, sad, full of emotion. Great job!! ♥

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DaSmolKitteh [2017-10-13 09:20:27 +0000 UTC]

whew, drama, drama, drama,

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ewitsarchie [2017-10-04 08:57:12 +0000 UTC]

I can't say I.. Uh.. "like" the story, or any of the characters. But I must say this is very unique and different, nothing like I have ever read before.

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Shadewing2005 [2017-09-18 04:18:40 +0000 UTC]

I just wanna ask: At the end of the video, what was Dirtpool and Bunnypaw looking at? 

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Milliecatdraws In reply to Shadewing2005 [2017-09-22 21:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Gullwing, he interrupted dirtpools outburst.

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Shadewing2005 In reply to Milliecatdraws [2017-09-27 23:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Thanks for telling me!

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Verfaieli [2017-08-30 23:16:28 +0000 UTC]

What did Gullwing after that? I want to know what happened to Dirtpool later :C

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CheeseCakePhantom [2017-08-30 18:19:00 +0000 UTC]

How interesting! I really love all the history behind that storyboard, it's really unique.

I wonder, with Dirtpool bringing cat-kill, would no one notice that the flesh might smell like kittypet, or at least like a cat in some form?
I'm just entertaining the thought for fun. I'm really interested to see what happens next!

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Soxeme [2017-08-27 22:31:36 +0000 UTC]

OoO dang, why does this make me question me almost? Why do I like Gullwing? Why is this so good? Why do you have to remind me I'm trash? But, in all seriousness this is a amazing backstory ,and I'll would love to hear more about it!

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Meow-Productions [2017-08-27 21:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Goodness gracious what an awesome character!!
And your video is just STUNNING, by the way!!! I loved it so much that I followed the link here! Instant watch!!
~Fluffkin

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Kittenpawsthethird [2017-08-22 22:16:06 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty cool. I've always wanted to do something for cannabalism in warriors, but never found the time amongst other projects to do it. Its such a dark and gritty conceot, yet holds such an endearing potential I'm glad to see someone else pursue the idea. I would love to read/see more of this story. Bunnypaw is a cutie as well!

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ThatChocolateSpaniel [2017-08-20 19:55:04 +0000 UTC]

I really like this story because it's so unique! Awesome job with the storyboard too!

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Bluethetiger123 [2017-08-20 02:54:19 +0000 UTC]

This explains so much lol, this is a really good plot you have going on, very interesting 😁

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owlcoholik [2017-08-19 03:49:15 +0000 UTC]

i loveee this story...awesome to see someone else makes up warrior cats oc stories like this haha

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Skiyrak [2017-08-19 02:06:53 +0000 UTC]

My Question Is At then End Of The Story Board What Where They Looking At? Or Is That Gonna Be In Another Story Board?

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TheRealists In reply to Skiyrak [2017-08-19 02:13:00 +0000 UTC]

At the end of this page it says the "Summary of the video"

Dirtpool was having a emotional outburst towards Bunnypaw when GullWing interrupted.

Hope that helps you understand the storyboard more :3

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Skiyrak In reply to TheRealists [2017-08-19 03:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh Thank You VERY Much! I Was So Confused!

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TheRealists In reply to Skiyrak [2017-08-19 04:21:08 +0000 UTC]

I got confused too before i found the summary xD

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Nanno0424 [2017-08-18 21:22:59 +0000 UTC]

This has to be one of my favorite backstories ever. The concept is so unique (I love the cannibal cat eating its own out of desperation) and the Storyboard was so perfect, I loved everything about this (I really hope you keep going off on this <3)

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alexandraj2 [2017-08-18 20:56:30 +0000 UTC]

wow. This is really cool

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TheOrderOfAssassins [2017-08-18 01:10:09 +0000 UTC]

An actual cat serial killer, rather than a spree killer. Interesting.

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Kniix [2017-08-17 21:31:38 +0000 UTC]

"my way or the highway"

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Straypaws [2017-08-17 20:13:55 +0000 UTC]

AHHHH!   I love the story! The storyboard is also very well done!! All of it is very original, I don't think we've ever heard of a cat eating other cats out of starvation in Warriors. 

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Zundel [2017-08-17 15:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Great story. Sad and disturbing but fascinating and well built at the same time.
I like how Dirtpool, despite his obvious flaws and insanity, isn't really a bad cat. Accually the reader (or at least me) can feel more dislike and hatred for Gullwing or Brightstar(already hate that guy). It's interesting.

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AmazingEight [2017-08-17 02:34:29 +0000 UTC]

I wanted to do something kinda like that with cannibalism. But with humans. Ahhh, sorry that sounded dark.  

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LittleKittySilver [2017-08-16 20:05:53 +0000 UTC]

I like the story. It's really messed up, but really well constructed.

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SunriseBear [2017-08-16 04:59:37 +0000 UTC]

I have a few questions about the character of your characters! What led these clan cats to blindly follow a tyrannical leader who wipes out an entire clan and not revolt against him, yet find what Dirtpool was doing immoral and evil when they themselves slaughtered innocent cats and kittens? Cannibalism seems like something Brightstar could take advantage of. Regardless of me having a bit of confusion about everyone's motives I really like your story! I'm a sucker for morals being compromised by desperation! I'd like to read this in long form some day! 

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SafulousArt In reply to SunriseBear [2017-08-16 10:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Because it's their leader, and they have respect for him. 
They don't want to have anything against him because they know they will be punished in the most horrendous ways. He has his reasons why he does that, he wants a strong clan, apathetic, trained to kill without hesitation. He is cruel but he is also charming, he manipulates with others a lot. The clan cats will slowly believe that his cruelty has good intentions, Brighstar actually belives himself that what he's been doing is good. 
His targets are kittens and apprentices, because they're still young and they learn.  ( I'm not talking about killing, but rather the '' brainwashing '' )
The clans cats don't necessary need to find him evil, but rather disgusting.
I would love to tell you more, but I don't want to give any important spoilers..quq not now. 

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HatorCreator [2017-08-16 02:26:47 +0000 UTC]

oh, so that was what at the end of the video. gullwing was there? makes more sense now.

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