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readforcertainthings [2020-08-07 03:44:40 +0000 UTC]
The famine was definitely a starclan punishment
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Chipmunqq [2020-04-18 23:21:46 +0000 UTC]
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Aliy1365 [2020-02-28 22:13:00 +0000 UTC]
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MiloCloodie [2019-01-24 23:07:41 +0000 UTC]
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ok...
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TypicalKitten1 [2019-01-07 01:59:24 +0000 UTC]
I am extremely uncomfortable
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Jay-Wolf-Hybrid [2018-04-22 23:46:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry if this has an obvious answer, but did Dirtpool end up being exiled? Or because Raspberrypelt started the fight will he somehow stay because he didn't originally intend to kill and eat Raspberrypelt?
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StarriiArii In reply to Jay-Wolf-Hybrid [2018-04-28 19:18:53 +0000 UTC]
Dirtpool probably ends up exiled. He made a deal with Gullwing to not kill a Clanmate and eat them but Gullwing caught him in the act and he's probably exiled.
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anthroFANfromHEAVEN [2018-02-24 17:21:46 +0000 UTC]
i love your awsome art and story of dirtpool, i litteraly watch the storyboard every day. keep up the good work!
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truble-inmy-paradise [2018-01-05 05:22:39 +0000 UTC]
holy shit duude, that's so freaking heavy but I'm in love with the video + your song choice. It sounds like you put a lot of thought and creativity into the story too. Like, the complexity of Dirtpool so that he's yeah, doing morally and ethically wrong things, but it's out of desperation and he still has humanity towards others of his clan and loves his mate + kits like,,, I'm emotional.
(also hello from youtube rabbit trails in 2018 lol)
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Slinky-Noodle [2017-11-28 01:42:09 +0000 UTC]
Hooo damn this is heavy
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LunaWolf103 [2017-11-13 05:11:07 +0000 UTC]
Oooohh.. that's what happens. Makes SO much more sense now! I mean, I caught on to the basics, but this clears everything up. Especially the ending
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Heldoryn [2017-11-11 19:02:02 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely adore this. The video was very well drawn and the story itself is amazing. It is so hard to construct a good character when it comes to cannibalism, and you worked it out wonderfully.
I'm astonished. It's one of my favourite videos <3
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Maplepiee [2017-10-29 22:37:54 +0000 UTC]
I love how well written this gory, depressing story is, especially the promise. I've read this many times, and just now noticed that the promise does come into play: Dirtpool said he wouldn't kill or eat his clan mates, and there he is, right in front of gullwing. I love this story so so much, it's just so well written, sad, full of emotion. Great job!! ♥
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DaSmolKitteh [2017-10-13 09:20:27 +0000 UTC]
whew, drama, drama, drama,
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ewitsarchie [2017-10-04 08:57:12 +0000 UTC]
I can't say I.. Uh.. "like" the story, or any of the characters. But I must say this is very unique and different, nothing like I have ever read before.
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Shadewing2005 [2017-09-18 04:18:40 +0000 UTC]
I just wanna ask: At the end of the video, what was Dirtpool and Bunnypaw looking at?
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Verfaieli [2017-08-30 23:16:28 +0000 UTC]
What did Gullwing after that? I want to know what happened to Dirtpool later :C
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CheeseCakePhantom [2017-08-30 18:19:00 +0000 UTC]
How interesting! I really love all the history behind that storyboard, it's really unique.
I wonder, with Dirtpool bringing cat-kill, would no one notice that the flesh might smell like kittypet, or at least like a cat in some form?
I'm just entertaining the thought for fun. I'm really interested to see what happens next!
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Soxeme [2017-08-27 22:31:36 +0000 UTC]
OoO dang, why does this make me question me almost? Why do I like Gullwing? Why is this so good? Why do you have to remind me I'm trash? But, in all seriousness this is a amazing backstory ,and I'll would love to hear more about it!
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Kittenpawsthethird [2017-08-22 22:16:06 +0000 UTC]
This is pretty cool. I've always wanted to do something for cannabalism in warriors, but never found the time amongst other projects to do it. Its such a dark and gritty conceot, yet holds such an endearing potential I'm glad to see someone else pursue the idea. I would love to read/see more of this story. Bunnypaw is a cutie as well!
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ThatChocolateSpaniel [2017-08-20 19:55:04 +0000 UTC]
I really like this story because it's so unique! Awesome job with the storyboard too!
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Bluethetiger123 [2017-08-20 02:54:19 +0000 UTC]
This explains so much lol, this is a really good plot you have going on, very interesting 😁
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owlcoholik [2017-08-19 03:49:15 +0000 UTC]
i loveee this story...awesome to see someone else makes up warrior cats oc stories like this haha
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Skiyrak [2017-08-19 02:06:53 +0000 UTC]
My Question Is At then End Of The Story Board What Where They Looking At? Or Is That Gonna Be In Another Story Board?
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TheRealists In reply to Skiyrak [2017-08-19 02:13:00 +0000 UTC]
At the end of this page it says the "Summary of the video"
Dirtpool was having a emotional outburst towards Bunnypaw when GullWing interrupted.
Hope that helps you understand the storyboard more :3
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Skiyrak In reply to TheRealists [2017-08-19 03:23:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh Thank You VERY Much! I Was So Confused!
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TheRealists In reply to Skiyrak [2017-08-19 04:21:08 +0000 UTC]
I got confused too before i found the summary xD
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Nanno0424 [2017-08-18 21:22:59 +0000 UTC]
This has to be one of my favorite backstories ever. The concept is so unique (I love the cannibal cat eating its own out of desperation) and the Storyboard was so perfect, I loved everything about this (I really hope you keep going off on this <3)
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alexandraj2 [2017-08-18 20:56:30 +0000 UTC]
wow. This is really cool
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TheOrderOfAssassins [2017-08-18 01:10:09 +0000 UTC]
An actual cat serial killer, rather than a spree killer. Interesting.
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Kniix [2017-08-17 21:31:38 +0000 UTC]
"my way or the highway"
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Straypaws [2017-08-17 20:13:55 +0000 UTC]
AHHHH! I love the story! The storyboard is also very well done!! All of it is very original, I don't think we've ever heard of a cat eating other cats out of starvation in Warriors.
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Zundel [2017-08-17 15:20:04 +0000 UTC]
Great story. Sad and disturbing but fascinating and well built at the same time.
I like how Dirtpool, despite his obvious flaws and insanity, isn't really a bad cat. Accually the reader (or at least me) can feel more dislike and hatred for Gullwing or Brightstar(already hate that guy). It's interesting.
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AmazingEight [2017-08-17 02:34:29 +0000 UTC]
I wanted to do something kinda like that with cannibalism. But with humans. Ahhh, sorry that sounded dark.
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LittleKittySilver [2017-08-16 20:05:53 +0000 UTC]
I like the story. It's really messed up, but really well constructed.
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SunriseBear [2017-08-16 04:59:37 +0000 UTC]
I have a few questions about the character of your characters! What led these clan cats to blindly follow a tyrannical leader who wipes out an entire clan and not revolt against him, yet find what Dirtpool was doing immoral and evil when they themselves slaughtered innocent cats and kittens? Cannibalism seems like something Brightstar could take advantage of. Regardless of me having a bit of confusion about everyone's motives I really like your story! I'm a sucker for morals being compromised by desperation! I'd like to read this in long form some day!
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SafulousArt In reply to SunriseBear [2017-08-16 10:12:06 +0000 UTC]
Because it's their leader, and they have respect for him.
They don't want to have anything against him because they know they will be punished in the most horrendous ways. He has his reasons why he does that, he wants a strong clan, apathetic, trained to kill without hesitation. He is cruel but he is also charming, he manipulates with others a lot. The clan cats will slowly believe that his cruelty has good intentions, Brighstar actually belives himself that what he's been doing is good.
His targets are kittens and apprentices, because they're still young and they learn. ( I'm not talking about killing, but rather the '' brainwashing '' )
The clans cats don't necessary need to find him evil, but rather disgusting.
I would love to tell you more, but I don't want to give any important spoilers..quq not now.
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HatorCreator [2017-08-16 02:26:47 +0000 UTC]
oh, so that was what at the end of the video. gullwing was there? makes more sense now.
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