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I suggest that you listen to this >[link] < while reading. Sankyuu!
"Hello, bella," Lovino smiled and greeted (Name) with a bouquet with yellow tulips, daisies, pink camellias, daffodils, and anemones, these are all different flowers with different meanings.
Yellow tulips talk about her smile that makes other people smile brighter. Daisies symbolizes (Name)'s innocence and purity and his loyal love for her. Pink camellias refer to his longing for her. Daffodils tell that she's the only one that Lovino loves and Anemones indicate his feeling of being forsaken.
He placed the bouquet beside her and sat beside her, watching her sleep peacefully.
He talked to her everyday about his problems, even if he knows there will be no response, even if he tried talking her again. Everyday, he silently prayed and prayed for her to be with him again, but his prayers never reach, no matter how much he prayed.
"Please tell me that you're suffering..." he begged.
"Please tell me that you're lonely..." he sobbed.
"Don't leave me behind..." he weeped.
"Has all hope turned into despair? I promise, I'll be strong this time. We, aren't we forever, the two of us, as one...?" he asked her without expecting anyone to reply.
"It's dark, I can't see!" she replied, although he can't hear her voice anymore.
"I can't hear a thing!" she tried to call him, but she failed.
"I'm scared!" she shouted.
"I'm suffering!" she yelled again.
"I'm lonely!" even though he can't hear her anymore, even if he can't touch her again, she knew he always loved her, even if they didn't have the chance to say it.
"I'm not lonely, because you're here. The warm hands that embraced me tell me so, even though I can't hear anymore. Your fingertips that touched me said 'I love you,'"
"Several winters passed by and I finally realized what this feeling is, I wasn't able to tell you this, but our hearts were always connected, right..?"
"Even if you're now wrapped in a world of loneliness, anguish and despair, I'm forever by your side, don't forget that. You will never be alone, I'm here with you," she realized that she can still be with him, make more happy memories with him, laugh with him and cry with him, she just needs to wait.
"Knowing that I am fated to rot away, I want even more strongly to keep breathing, to keep singing. I wish I too could leave something behind, proof of the life that I lived,"
"Hey, please, just once more, just for this time now, I want to smile, by your side. I want to sing together with you, I want to sing a gentle song,"
"I wanted to dedicate to you a mournful farewell song. In my last moments, I wanted to tell you... Thank you," she begged and begged until all that she can see is white and she slowly vanished away.
An ephemeral life rises to heaven and takes on the colour of the melting snow.
Nothing remains, not even a soul.
Each and every thing.
Comments: 35
TheSoaringStaraptor In reply to SadBiscuit [2015-07-20 15:52:04 +0000 UTC]
It's totally fine. That was my first time writing a critique, as well, so I'm sorry if I came if harsh. ^-^"
*Yeah. I made this when I was younger. I got really bored one day and started messing with Pokemon sprites, haha.
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SadBiscuit In reply to Amizore [2015-06-16 08:05:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Yes, it's kind of a sequel, you're the first one to actually notice that ^^
I'm glad you like my stories, thanks for the critiques! >///<
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Amizore In reply to SadBiscuit [2015-06-16 15:34:29 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! You did an amazing job! ^^
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SadBiscuit In reply to HetalianWitch [2015-12-18 13:13:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm so sorry if my reader insert made you sad ;; A ;; Here, have a hug
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iluvpurple01 [2015-11-27 07:37:36 +0000 UTC]
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SadBiscuit In reply to iluvpurple01 [2015-11-28 04:18:36 +0000 UTC]
Haha Yeah, I'm a big fan of that series ;; w ;;
I made this months ago, so it's mostly crappy, especially when it's coming from me uvu
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SadBiscuit In reply to iluvpurple01 [2015-11-29 10:41:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ;; w ;; That's good to hear!
The series touched my heart, as well as the hearts of other people. I've heard the songs many times already, but I still can't help but be emotional while listening to them uvu
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ScythicKitty [2015-09-13 06:33:28 +0000 UTC]
This is such a heartbreaking, but sweet piece. There is a lot of real emotion in this and you really feel the despair and the little bit of hope we cling to while reading it.
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SadBiscuit In reply to ScythicKitty [2015-09-13 06:43:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! ;w; Your comment means a lot to me; I'll do my best and I'll continue writing more fanfictions for everyone ^^
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SadBiscuit In reply to ScythicKitty [2015-09-24 08:41:12 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, again! >w< Phew! I thought you were going to be upset or something! ;w; Whoa, that's a REALLY long period of time; deviants gone for that long are always thought of as inactive. I'm glad you're not yet inactive! =w= I'd never be away from dA for more than a month... Seriously, I can't leave my watchers... T~T
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ScythicKitty In reply to SadBiscuit [2015-09-25 23:28:30 +0000 UTC]
Haha nah, that would be something really petty to be upset over!
Four years is quite awhile huh? I agree, at that point, most people would be considered inactive. Though at the time, it was when I was first starting out and any watchers I had were all my friends that I see regularly, so I wasn't leaving anyone behind. XD Now though, I've met some amazing people on here so if I'm gone for more than two weeks, it'd probably be because of vacation or something very serious. ^^
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AskDunaNichs [2015-07-21 02:54:24 +0000 UTC]
Is this based on the song Proof of Life? Some of it is exactly the same, word for word. If not, that's a really weird coincidence.
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SadBiscuit In reply to AskDunaNichs [2015-07-21 13:03:24 +0000 UTC]
Kind of...? I think it's more on the Soundless Voice part and stuff, especially if you read my other fanfic... Sorry, I was obsessed with the songs long ago and I felt like writing a APH reader insert... ^^'
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sampea [2015-05-21 15:29:30 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful!
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SadBiscuit In reply to sampea [2015-05-21 18:05:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! >///<
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ShortStackMeira [2015-05-18 00:35:46 +0000 UTC]
It's amazing... So beautiful
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16CleverTaunts [2015-05-17 16:45:00 +0000 UTC]
This was so beautiful and sad! Absolutely fantastic!
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