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Sabtastic — Ballpoint Pen Monster Girl by-nc-nd

Published: 2014-08-16 19:07:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 7868; Favourites: 466; Downloads: 65
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Description I don't normally post iphone quality photos of my artwork, but sadly I no longer have a scanner! < /3 

Drew this little miss on green paper with black ballpoint pen, sharpie, silver marker (the eyes and necklace are highly reflective), and white acrylic Molotow pen.
Took about 2-3 hours!

I'm actually really happy with how this turned out (despite the characteristic flaws that come with drawing straight away in pen). I based her face on the style of an artist I really admire on Twitter--! (KR0NPR1NZ ).

So far the artwork is doing really well on /r/IDAP on Reddit , so I might actually part with the original if I can find somebody to compensate me for it... Yay! 

Anywho, it's been a while since my last art update, but I promise to have a TRUCKLOAD of new content soon! I'm just wrapping up 13 commissions that I made as a fund-raiser for my collision last month. They're due to be posted soon! c:
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Comments: 50

ThePromised1 [2024-10-16 23:58:32 +0000 UTC]

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Lord-Garon [2023-10-10 00:17:41 +0000 UTC]

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Athane [2014-08-19 04:22:10 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


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Your art is bad and you should feel bad..............


Can you imagine. I spent some time sitting here thinking, man I should post this shitty critique, just to be a dick. But I cant, because I love your art. (But image this with half a star on each rating, funny right).

Pros:
-Tieflings are an awesome race of creature I love them, they are Pathfinder's (basically D&D) most customizable race. So there is that (5/5 impact)

-Narrow her eyes a bit, and this is basically a Sabtiefling. I think she looks a little like you.

-The detailing on the horns is top notch as well as the bright silver eyes.

Cons:

-The not using pencil on that line across the chin/lower jaw bothers me. its like, this line....I dont know...I want to erase it...hnng (.5 a point from tech)

-Her right (left of image) shoulder looks a little off. It looks like her shoulder is dislocated and sitting on her torso, rather than to the side. Unless she is reaching up, at which point we would be able to see the armpit at the bottom. On second look It looks like the shoulder is just too short. Its hard to describe, but I think you get the point (hence the low Vision rating)

Overall I would say START OVER DO IT AGAIN! *FLIPS TABLE*

lol, 9/10, I love it, good job!

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Sabtastic In reply to Athane [2014-08-28 14:55:05 +0000 UTC]

LOL 

I guess I should probably reply before you feel bad and think that I took your joke the wrong way!! SORRYYYY! Completely side-tracked as usual; my bad.

Thanks for the constructive feedback! I agree with all of your observations. Pen is just so fun to draw with because you CAN'T go back and meticulously edit all the little flaws and mistakes -- feels way more therapeutic for me and I usually SURPRISINGLY end up with something I like. c:

Tieflings sound really cool! I'll keep that race in mind if I ever feel like appealing to the D&D crowd. Could have fun with it since the characters are so infinitely customizable! 

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Athane In reply to Sabtastic [2014-08-28 19:13:33 +0000 UTC]

My pen drawings end up the same way. I start with a little sketch where I don't worry about mistakes, end up wishing I hadn't drawn it on a post-it note or a scrap sheet of paper. Its that feeling of letting go with your art...though mine don't look nearly as good as yours.

Edit: Also I could probably find room at one of our Pathfinder games if you were ever interested in joining.

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WickedPrince [2015-04-21 19:28:24 +0000 UTC]

I can't figure out if I want to date her, or if I did date her, and didn't realize it. I've dated some pretty hellish ones.

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MrSentriss [2014-12-06 02:46:42 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome! 
 Great job!

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Barkindji [2014-09-23 03:47:23 +0000 UTC]

That's crazy-good. I bet it smells though aha. Pen drawings. 

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Sabtastic In reply to Barkindji [2014-09-24 02:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha, nah it's fine! Once the markers dry I don't notice that alcohol/sharpie smell.

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Barkindji In reply to Sabtastic [2014-09-24 06:33:36 +0000 UTC]

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Kendioke [2014-09-22 00:45:46 +0000 UTC]

DUCK! -Points at the charm on her left horn-

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Sabtastic In reply to Kendioke [2014-09-24 02:53:09 +0000 UTC]

lol good eye!  

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Hyptosis [2014-09-07 04:32:33 +0000 UTC]

She's gorgeous, and you're rocking the colored paper! I really need to bust out some paper and act like a real artist sometime. Keep it up! ^5

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Sabtastic In reply to Hyptosis [2014-09-07 18:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha Thanks!!
The only reason I keep doodling on cheap paper is because I keep buying all these cool art markers and I just HAVE TO DRAW with them. <: 

My three favourite so far are the PenTel Brush Pens , the Copic Drawing Pen , and all of the Molotow Acrylic Paint Pens because they have AMAZING opaque white to highlight stuff with.

Seriously man; if you get these you'll be unable to stop doodling. lol

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Hyptosis In reply to Sabtastic [2014-09-07 20:44:21 +0000 UTC]

I will certainly check these out! They look really fun. When it comes to pens and markers and stuff, I really have no clue what to buy nor how to use any of them.

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Aristodes [2014-08-23 04:15:24 +0000 UTC]

I don't see how anyone could dislike this. It's not like it has an offensive label or anything. Very nicely done.

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Sabtastic In reply to Aristodes [2014-08-28 14:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! 

Haha, if you're referring to the review at the top of this page; he was just kidding around. 

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Gismome7Nightmary [2014-08-23 02:31:49 +0000 UTC]

That's just awsome!

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Jar3d-Washington [2014-08-22 21:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Those horns are just awesome! I like that there is a ribbon tied to the one on the left.

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AllenChilders [2014-08-21 17:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!

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ColinMeyer777 [2014-08-21 11:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Sexy

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Riv0t [2014-08-21 04:30:26 +0000 UTC]

You have improved so much! You've always been amazing, but you really have perfected your style and quality of work. This is amazing.

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Sabtastic In reply to Riv0t [2014-08-21 12:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Ahh thanks!! ://3
You've improved a lot too!! 


WE'RE MOVIN' ON UP

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Riv0t In reply to Sabtastic [2014-08-22 04:27:32 +0000 UTC]

Level up!!! :3

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Ragnarok6664 [2014-08-20 18:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Sweet love the horns

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Athane [2014-08-20 04:05:29 +0000 UTC]

still in love with this, showed it to a friend, also forgot to put a 'LOL' in my critique after the first line, sorry if it led to confusion

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yakiteri [2014-08-18 00:09:18 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful!! Her expression is wonderful and I love the limited color palette you chose!

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Sabtastic In reply to yakiteri [2014-08-18 05:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu! <:

It means a lot coming from you!

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yakiteri In reply to Sabtastic [2014-08-19 16:52:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Your work is always super pretty and awesome!

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Semiautomagic [2014-08-17 14:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Is it longing in her eyes, is it mischief? She seems to be lost in thought, and it looks so realistic, so natural. I really like the little touches of dressing her horns with a little flair, just to help make her feel pretty or special. She seems like the kind of individual who might turn heads, that would encourage people to come up to speak with her; but I am not certain if she realizes it. I adore the stories that you artwork starts to develop in my mind, each time I see something new from you. I know my little ideas may not fit the character that you create, but this is a lovely piece and my mind can't help but want to know more about this person. Glad to see more coming from you, take care and let your imagination run wild!

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Sabtastic In reply to Semiautomagic [2014-08-17 14:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh this is so flattering you don't even know!! 

The idea that I'm inspiring creative thought of any variety means so much to me. Thank you.

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ProfZamn [2014-08-17 08:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Very impressive

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Sabtastic In reply to ProfZamn [2014-08-17 14:55:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! < 3

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Chantel-sky [2014-08-17 07:43:29 +0000 UTC]

She kinda reminds me of a female Draenei from WoW, not sure if that was your intention
Nice work though

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Sabtastic In reply to Chantel-sky [2014-08-17 14:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Some other people were pointing that out, too...! Wasn't really my intention personally, but I'm glad it sparks the thought! ...Draenei look so awesome!!

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SweetieBatch [2014-08-17 06:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Deathmaws [2014-08-17 05:38:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how but you always manage to make rather terrifying creatures with a woman's physique very attractive. Keep up the great work.

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Hustonovich [2014-08-17 04:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Gotta love that cute expression. Great work Sab!

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Sabtastic In reply to Hustonovich [2014-08-17 05:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks maaaaan! <:

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KillerDrock [2014-08-17 03:42:11 +0000 UTC]

So Hot!

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Sabtastic In reply to KillerDrock [2014-08-17 05:27:04 +0000 UTC]

Hah thankyou!

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magicswordz [2014-08-17 00:35:40 +0000 UTC]

Pretty awesome Sabby.
I do like them demon girls

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Sabtastic In reply to magicswordz [2014-08-17 05:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mang

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AK-Is-Harmless [2014-08-17 00:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Really well done!

---AK

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Sabtastic In reply to AK-Is-Harmless [2014-08-17 05:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!! c:

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AK-Is-Harmless In reply to Sabtastic [2014-08-17 12:10:17 +0000 UTC]



---AK

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Bensaret [2014-08-16 19:58:32 +0000 UTC]

She is sooo cute! Love that face

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ShotLiver [2014-08-16 19:52:48 +0000 UTC]

daddy like.

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Starayo [2014-08-16 19:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, that looks wonderful.

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Bai2u-Art [2014-08-16 19:09:47 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work It's so nice when starting straight away with pen gives good end result isn't it? <3 Great job! 

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