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ryuuen — SDL Aoki Duel 03 p09 LAST
Published: 2008-01-03 16:49:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1639; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Dude, this page....doesn't make any sense to me xD
well, last two panels, basically.... Aoki just... suddenly fell asleep out of exhaustion and... uh... trauma :'D
lol.
So, like, another bad experience comic from me. Since my right thumb had been and still is out of commission and hurting. Art quality had gone down... again, like my OCBC r7 with *SamuraiHaruko that my drawing arm was in an arm sling so I used my left to draw and lost because of art quality~ haha >> [link]
Sorry, my mother's asdlkas;dlk;asldka at me to finish her stupid video prod and like.... she's really angry at me and denying that she forced the project on me.
NO SLEEP TONIGHT K.
Aoki vs Dalisay
Dalisay owned by ~acrimsonrose
Itami owned by me
Fireoth (Fai-chan) owned by *fireoz
Page 01 - [link]
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Comments: 30
forgive me for saying that was extremely anticlimactic
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... they didn't even show the battle, even though there seemed to be some strong feelings leading op to it
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i understood this one, but personally thought it ended too quickly
...anticlimactic as in "omg! she has my mothers hakama! rage build! the opponent challenges her cooly. tension build! charge! and...! she gets killed offscreen."
it built up pressure and didnt do much with it. plus gave the enemy a lame ending for her cool intro
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What kind of ending were you expecting?
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hmm, maybe a sword clash or two?
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for the sake of etertainment? why else?
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why would that be entertaining if it doesn't do anything for the story?
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because... ykow... its a duel? and duels usually contain action?
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well, it was too quick for me, but i guess not you
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As I said I read this in a series.
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well, it was too quick for me, i dont know about you
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You sure showed me. No ten rank deduction indeed
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eh? no sleep tonight?... and you drew that so cutely in your resolution...^^
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I still think it turned out great! ^_^
Hope your thumb can recover. It's it inconvienient...always the times when an artist needs to draw the most that they end up hurting their hands. -_-
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LOL dayum she beat Dalisay up...HMPH that's the last time she picks up any of the stuff you leave behind!
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i'm posting the other ending in a few minutes xD
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Aoki's pretty sensitive about this kinda stuff aint she? D:
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So.. thats the end of the duel? Too bad you're so busy with stuff. Would've been more interesting if it weren't so onesided... On a random note, whats a haori? O_O
Aaaand... Aoki's a mama's girl 8D
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lol, if I hadn't injured my thumb, and hadn't got my mother nagging me, it would have been a 30-pager ._.
and a haori is a japanese over-coat/jacket thing
example is: [link]
the yellow colourful jacket Aoki is wearing
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Oh I see...Did Aoki lose it or something in a previous battle? O_O
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