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LimOreoh [2016-07-27 07:55:57 +0000 UTC]
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can not say very well how to express this drawing,but I can try,and in the form of criticism.
The color is very good,very well made,and a fabulous shade, but you have to watch some remaining bugs around,or outputs that has left the shadows .
eyes just have to watch them more straight,not curved quedarlos very well to the face,so you have to watch sometimes,but nothing happens,nor is it a failure that you can put a lot of hits.
blur,very well where you located blur,but I recommend some other parts also blur more,to make it look more professional .... so to speak,but as above,is not a failure that has to be put view Hahaha.
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Scipiori [2016-06-10 13:02:39 +0000 UTC]
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Hey, hey, hey, hey! You got some beautiful colors and textures happening here. I love the use of a subtle triadic color scheme with a heavy focus on blue / violet. It makes that yellow of the sunflower pop right out!
As far as critical notes, it doesn't feel like your character is holding the sunflower. The hand is too loose. However, the angle does make the piece a bit more lively.
That being said, The composition is tightly cropped and I like it because it gives us a more empathetic and and emotional experience with the focal point being so near the characters super-expressive eyes, which are the most saturated colors in the piece. (Not a bad thing, just a statement.)
But my critical suggestion for the comp is that her pose, while seemingly proportionally accurate and pleasing, is really stiff. I like the subtle weight on the right hip pulling down and the left hip rising up with the gust of wind. I love this idea, but I think you could push it a bit to make the pose more dynamic and expressive.
I'd be interested to see what pulling the sunflower down a bit looks like, so that we can get a clearer read on what your focal point is, because right now the concentric circular shapes in the sunflower are competing with her face.
Aside from that, it's very beautiful stuff. You have an amazing knack for color! Keep rockin' dude. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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ThunderGrave [2016-06-10 03:27:06 +0000 UTC]
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Apologize for the long review. Through my own way I went ahead and described how I felt about this piece of art to the point where I realize I may not have made a bit of sense, so I'm keeping it the way it is, but at the end I'm putting a pro/con list to just point out the main points of what I liked.
I imagine walking through a meadow of sunflowers. The sun is shining through the parted clouds of what was a dreary and rainy day and to my surprise I find a soothing and calming soul adrift among the sunflowers. I make my way towards them, curious of what they might be up to and oddly enough, something keeps drawing me closer. I get within audible distance and call out to her. She turns and it's as if time has come to a complete stop. In that moment, an image ever so picturesque is engraved in my mind. Who is she? Is she an angel? She's seems so full of life and there's something else. What is this? I.... I think it's called vibrancy. A kind of shining light that gives you that warm fuzzy feeling inside.
The image I capture is of an effigy of mother nature herself. Beauty is the apparent truth. I can tell she's soaked, although not much. In fact, the water itself adds a new layer that mine eyes have yet to fully realize. From the hair, the slight wetness allows for the sun's reflection to cast a rainbow over her head, almost like a halo. It might even be somewhat of an aurora like effect. From then downward, I notice a multitude of water droplets and particles of water scattered about her. They make her shimmer as if she were a celestial being, something out of this world. Honestly, I see perfection. Well, for the most part. There's one hankering little detail. It's the odd bit of black text hanging to the upper right of my vision. I think it should be in a more stylized format. It seems too out of place otherwise.
Pros:
1. Highly impactful style.
2. The weather effects add a nice level of realism.
3. Feels like a still life photograph that captured a very perfect moment.
4. The colors make everything feel very vibrant and alive.
5. The overall attention to detail left me very impressed.
6. I particularly enjoyed the particle effect you added using the water. It was a really nice touch and it's surprisingly subtle. At first I didn't notice it, but it explains why she was glowing to me.
Cons:
1. The text in the upper right. While it's understandable you'd use black for it to stand out, I don't like that it's plain. I feel it really detracts from the work itself, when it could be something that enhances it. A more stylized typeface would add a greater amount of cohesion to piece as a whole.
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Aragnos06 In reply to Emersonian [2016-06-09 16:54:07 +0000 UTC]
Comment ça ? J'ai juste écrit un avis qui fait une quinzaine de lignes !
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Emersonian In reply to Aragnos06 [2016-06-09 18:40:19 +0000 UTC]
Pardon, je faisais un commentaire sur le dessin.
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Aragnos06 In reply to Emersonian [2016-06-09 19:20:00 +0000 UTC]
Ah OK !
Ça aurait été possible de commenter le dessin depuis la page où il se trouvait ! Parce que en commentant sur la page de la critique, c'est moi qui reçois les notifications et non l'auteur du dessin !
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Otori-0 [2016-07-18 12:53:12 +0000 UTC]
Can I use it like profile icon?
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Spark1eFountain [2016-06-25 01:18:14 +0000 UTC]
The way you shade, the way you do lighting! It's amazing! I wish I can do amazing lighting and shading like you<3
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michesan [2016-06-19 21:20:50 +0000 UTC]
How prettyyy
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XandImus [2016-06-19 18:47:40 +0000 UTC]
such a radiant sunny personality
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Passin [2016-06-18 17:58:03 +0000 UTC]
Happy birthday indeed. Nice work
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AzureRat [2016-06-18 00:47:47 +0000 UTC]
Nozomi is so pretty.
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ChibiYvi [2016-06-14 11:27:57 +0000 UTC]
wow so amazing!!
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CH3N9 [2016-06-13 16:18:32 +0000 UTC]
Beauty~ <3 :3
Elegant composure and tingling angelic expression.
The scenario of this picture: Summer. In an late afternoon, the mist rain had let up a little, she took a stroll. On the park bathed golden, there the summer wind blow. She stroll and hum to the rhythm in the wind, as she slowly began reminisce of her journeys. Counting her bless and faithful encounter with her companion. The reminiscence bring around her to question whether the time will last. Her steps come to halt as she stood and gaze up the sky. She was taken by surprise, not startle, as a small voice calling out from behind ... [Fill in your imagination!]
Sorry, I haven't watch the show, I am only speak of the vague impression, adding any out of character storyline might spark conflict ( = 3 ...
On the technical aspect of the work, the right-bottom corner distract me the most (maybe due to the hard-line(?) there). The sunflower and Nozomi is fighting for attention! (The color, maybe). The lighting is breezily cool although I thought a little bit of late afternoon warms could help illuminate the character feature, especially the shadow and hair. (But I don't think that is possible using paint...right?).
Feeling a little disturbed, I try give it a go in photoshop just for the heck of it. Voila! Ideally speaking it is good looking although the result is slightly deviated from the original ways a digital artwork ought to be ... sta.sh/0zz9fkpzf5d
Overall I think your work is amazing. Can feel your artistic love in the air ~ xD
Keep em coming! Rosuuri-san!
On the playlist: Frank Sinatra - The Way You Look Tonight
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Blue-marin [2016-06-13 13:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful
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Xeanium [2016-06-13 12:33:56 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
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Candy-Meow [2016-06-12 17:49:54 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful~
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MileAthy3 [2016-06-12 14:29:54 +0000 UTC]
l love this drawing 4ever <3
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AlphaSquadDirector [2016-06-12 13:50:36 +0000 UTC]
What a babe. Love that dead sunflower to lol
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doraralk [2016-06-11 18:59:22 +0000 UTC]
the details are like holy water for my eyes
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saruicchi [2016-06-11 04:22:32 +0000 UTC]
SSOO PRETTYY
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Sakura--Art [2016-06-10 16:15:42 +0000 UTC]
So gorgeous!
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AnimeOtakuOji [2016-06-10 15:57:06 +0000 UTC]
this is a beautiful piece
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marikadaa [2016-06-10 09:05:51 +0000 UTC]
Lovely ^^
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Onikintsu [2016-06-10 03:03:17 +0000 UTC]
GOD I really do like your eyes :3
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finex666 [2016-06-10 02:31:30 +0000 UTC]
elegant and beautiful ^___
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