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Rose-Noire007 — The Unspoken Inner Child
Published: 2006-10-30 00:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description       Pictures of childhood
Cast dark shadows on my mind
      Destined to haunt me
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Comments: 11

AvidLiterate [2007-01-01 07:19:24 +0000 UTC]

I agree with the woman above, this is simply beautiful. I write haikus myself and I must say this is top notch.

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to AvidLiterate [2007-01-01 07:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I love haikus, I will check yours out. >.<

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AvidLiterate In reply to Rose-Noire007 [2007-01-01 07:31:50 +0000 UTC]

um...just joined so i only have 1 up, still read it plz, thx

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to AvidLiterate [2007-01-01 07:35:22 +0000 UTC]

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AvidLiterate In reply to Rose-Noire007 [2007-01-01 07:37:21 +0000 UTC]

lol did you forget to smile before?

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Narabedla [2006-12-29 12:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Lurrrrve it. You are a great poet! So much depth, rhythm, dare I say musicality?, and still the sound is ever so pretty and simple. Love it.

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to Narabedla [2006-12-30 22:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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greeneyedwings [2006-11-09 06:51:36 +0000 UTC]

I like it -I think you capture the depth of the simplicity (bit of a contradiction there, I know) of a haiku well with it

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to greeneyedwings [2006-11-12 23:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, that's actually what I was aiming for, more or less.

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Fae-Falor [2006-10-30 16:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.... interesting haiku...

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to Fae-Falor [2006-10-31 06:48:39 +0000 UTC]

lol it means a lot on a deeper level, but...that's a loooooooong story. lol

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