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Rose-Noire007 β€” Aching Lament
Published: 2007-01-19 03:12:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 287; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description O, sacred heart
Love of the seek
Your thrill to taste
Revealed

The regret forewarned
You still asked to taste the bitter cup
A drink to anger
To wrench

A tear within the soul for you
Regret and love fills my bosom
The tears beg to escape from their asylum for you

The heavenly bond
Within a toddler’s time
A friendship and love so strong
Brought us together, defying time

I ask of you to remember
Behind the lids of your light
Remember that hate for you does not exist
My rage was started from loneliness, from fright

In Neverland, our hearts lay
Ready
Ready for us to unite again one day

I regret
O, how I regret
Please forgive the harsh words

A way to release inner emotion
This is what I give to reason

I love you
I am filled with regret

Lacey, mon ami
I love you
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Comments: 11

AvidLiterate [2007-02-08 05:34:38 +0000 UTC]

I can tell that you love your friend. Sorry I know it says "critique not desired" but still I just hadda say...

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mnkywitagun [2007-01-20 04:36:49 +0000 UTC]

very nice^^ good job tay

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to mnkywitagun [2007-01-21 05:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Britton. >.< (Or should I say "Brit" since we're on cousin-nickname basis here? lol)

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mnkywitagun In reply to Rose-Noire007 [2007-01-21 21:10:56 +0000 UTC]

I really dont care if ya call me britton on the internet Taylor...

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to mnkywitagun [2007-01-21 22:01:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm j/k.

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mnkywitagun In reply to Rose-Noire007 [2007-01-22 01:12:00 +0000 UTC]

i kinda realized that because of the "lol" at the end^^

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torr64 [2007-01-19 22:08:26 +0000 UTC]

Another great poem!!! Congratz!!

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to torr64 [2007-01-21 05:33:37 +0000 UTC]

You're too kind...

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torr64 In reply to Rose-Noire007 [2007-01-21 20:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It's sooo good!!^^ You write definitively excellent!!!

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Fae-Falor [2007-01-19 04:24:52 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Very well written.
And it's about our good friend Lacey!

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Rose-Noire007 In reply to Fae-Falor [2007-01-21 05:31:25 +0000 UTC]

She IS amazing.

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