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Published: 2011-11-28 07:29:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 332; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 13
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woah. this is so creepy and cool. i love those deeeeep gashes. they look painful lol
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Well, those are supposed to be scars ^^
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my god, you have made amazing progress, how long did this take you to draw!?
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I dunno
I tend to draw in an irregular basis, this being no exception
Also, why are you surprised, it's only been a year, so my skills haven't improved that much
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I'm surprised because you have gotten much better than I did in that same time, your skills have jumped in an incredible rate
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Yes, but there are some stuff I still fail at, such as female anatomy and perspective.
The fact that I got the perspective right in this piece was partly based on luck
Also, did you see the WIPs of this piece?
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1st WIP- [link]
2nd WIP- [link]
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wow, you got alot better, I can tell just by looking at it you spent alot of time on it
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If I did improve as much as you say, then maybe, just MAYBE, you can look forward to my story (And maybe a few doujins) being drawn next year! (And by next year I mean about 10-12 months from now)
PS: Not only did I improve, but I also did some MAJOR re-writing and added a LOT more to my story this past year ^^ (forgive me if I'm sounding arrogant)
PSS: I did put some effort into this because it was my first official request, I didn't want to do any half-a***d work
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its alright, and awesome! so what have you changed in your story?
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For one, Yandoro's not as insane as I described him to you!
Also, you know how the story consisted of three parts? I decided to make those three stories into one saga! With three sagas in total! *stands proudly*
That kidnapping, that training, the battle between Ruc and Yandoro; all that taking place in three parts, now being all of that being just the story of Saga 1!
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well bravo! sounds like you've learned alot since last time!, I cant wait to see what your charcaters will look revised
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Learned what?
Also, do you want to hear the summaries of each Saga?
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along with that, are you thinking of drawing updated versions of your characters?
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Well...
Here's a somewhat updated version of Yandoro --> [link]
Here's a new character I've drawn (but beware, it's very anatomically off. Yes, when it comes to putting anatomy into use, ESPECIALLY female anatomy, I suck a**) --> [link]
And here are some concept sketches I've been working on. The ones that are for my story are the ones in yellow graph paper, the rest are for other things... --> [link]
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its alright, I'm still doing kinda bad with female anatomy, its alot harder to work with drawing the opposite gender
thats why i started to work with references, [link] is the best in my opinion
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well, you've gotten better a perspective, back when you started, you didnt use it much and your work looked flat, now it doesnt, and sure, it would be nice to hear it, but sen it to me in a note so I can keep tabs on it for the paradox
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Also, what do you mean by 'for the paradox'?
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But why would you want to know about my story for your story?
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xD paradox is the manga crossover remember!? lol
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Paradox is a crossover manga? I thought it was an original story with anthro characters in it
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my god man,
you were one of the only few that entered humans besides me
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If you're referring to Yandoro, then technically, he is not a human, he is a Darcu
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ok fin, your the only person not to add a NON ANTHRO xD
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yup, about 3 or 4 people, and two aliens
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My perspective may still not be my desired standards, it certainly no longer looks flat
They're just summaries, each only about 1 to 2 sentences long. You still want to take it to notes?
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yup, I would still like it in a note, cuz when i got to draw them, I like to get into character, and a few phrases they say, the way they're creator acts, and some backstory goes a long way.
besides, it helps to see your point of view on them, so i can make my own version of what the characters think while in they're story
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What do you mean, why would you want to get into character with my OCs?
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its a weird thing i do with all characters, so that i can make sure they will say stuff in the comic that you would be sure they would say, I do it with everyones character, even rachel, thats why she shows a bit more emotion than i planned, i realized from her point of view, she WOULD have emotions, just not as strong, for the most part, the few times the emotion she shows are strong is when she is really scared (like the blood) or when shes really, REALLY angry (from that guy when she was shot at in the car)
get it? ^^
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I think I understand
I suck at this psychological stuff (ironic, because I'm trying to make my story that genre).
Anyways, I think I'll send you the note
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a very nice job, you did a good job drawing Allen if you ask me
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But which one do you prefer, the first draft, the second draft, or the finished piece?
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I like them all in truth, it gives me the feeling of watching art become something great
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