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Rock-Royalty — Last sounds
Published: 2005-06-02 10:48:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 47; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description Her hand goes limp
she drops the bloody razor
and watches it fall to the floor
through her blurred vision
the last thing she felt
was her head hit the floor
the last thing she heard
was a scream, a sob
...and a prayer
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Comments: 8

CryingDove [2005-06-03 13:40:37 +0000 UTC]

goddamn heathy, how come you gets so many talentses? your writings are so awesome theyre all so powerful like wow. loving this writing

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BrokenBabe15 [2005-06-02 23:45:13 +0000 UTC]

i love it . againa i can relate to it and it kix so much as! !!!!!!!!!!!

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bleeding-angel666 [2005-06-02 11:27:41 +0000 UTC]

awesome dude, damn i wish i could write as good as you

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Rock-Royalty In reply to bleeding-angel666 [2005-06-02 11:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Dude?

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bleeding-angel666 In reply to Rock-Royalty [2005-06-02 11:42:33 +0000 UTC]

lol uhuh, dude

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Masulja [2005-06-02 11:10:32 +0000 UTC]

wow! that's amazing))

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simmo-g [2005-06-02 10:54:33 +0000 UTC]

thats good heather, 'the last thing she felt was her head hit the floor' is so...i dont know just yeah.

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BrotherFenris [2005-06-02 10:49:58 +0000 UTC]

short, sweet, yet still packing that awesome punch...i like it

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