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A broken heart, births great art––

it bleeds you dry, but as you sigh, cry, and whimper goodbye…as you think, and slowly sink, your soul drips ink, over tattered pages, as you blink––
away your tears, writing for minutes to wash away years, drinking beers, until your fear; disappears––
for at least one more night, void of light, illuminating your now tainted, fainted, no-longer-delight–– it took flight, it caught alight, it didn't fight, no longer in sight––so now you write.

You say what you couldn't, perhaps what you shouldn't, you wouldn't––
have understood before, now you're on the floor, done for, needing more, hurting deep within your inner-core, locking every single door-–
from emotion, commotion, it's all in slow motion, your lost in an ocean––
of your very own sorrow, you borrow a tomorrow, but just for today, there must be a way, that doesn't weigh––
you down to the ground, steal what you've found, leave you bound, till you drown, surrounded by profound, screeching sounds––
filling you with torment, and resentment, born without contentment, it's been sent to prevent it––
to begin castration, starvation, temptation, provocation.––

You begin to create, using your love, your hate, your sadness, your faith, you sit and wait, for your mind's bait, to open the gate––

to freedom.

A broken heart, births great art.

© Rocio Belinda Mendez 24/9/ 2013
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Comments: 23

theShadowGrove [2013-10-01 23:23:13 +0000 UTC]

I love it when i read the first two sentences of something and it b/c i already know it's gonna be awesome, great job!

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rociobelindamendez In reply to theShadowGrove [2013-10-02 02:23:02 +0000 UTC]

ohh thanks so much I appreciate it x

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chromeantennae [2013-09-30 13:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Your work is wonderful, my friend.

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rociobelindamendez In reply to chromeantennae [2013-09-30 22:42:03 +0000 UTC]

ohhh thank you I greatly appreciate your words x

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chromeantennae In reply to rociobelindamendez [2013-09-30 22:42:59 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, as always.

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rociobelindamendez In reply to chromeantennae [2013-09-30 22:50:28 +0000 UTC]

 

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chromeantennae In reply to rociobelindamendez [2013-10-01 02:00:53 +0000 UTC]

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FantasyAqua [2013-09-26 21:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Very nice ! <3 I love how it rimes !

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rociobelindamendez In reply to FantasyAqua [2013-09-27 04:45:31 +0000 UTC]

ah thank u very much! it's rap-like .. x

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FantasyAqua In reply to rociobelindamendez [2013-09-27 19:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha Kind of XD

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MaskedWannabee [2013-09-23 21:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Another poet trapped inside the cages of rhyme, like myself.
I love it.

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rociobelindamendez In reply to MaskedWannabee [2013-09-24 00:20:27 +0000 UTC]

hehe mm I do love rhyme, but words always win out, no matter how they are strung together thanks u for reading xx

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Kapturekid [2013-09-23 19:48:47 +0000 UTC]

I love it , reminds me of my photos concept;

kapturekid.deviantart.com/art/…

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rociobelindamendez In reply to Kapturekid [2013-09-24 00:20:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks u.. mm nice photograph x

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Kapturekid In reply to rociobelindamendez [2013-09-24 05:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Thx lol

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Mendedpixie [2013-09-23 18:34:35 +0000 UTC]

I would love to hear this spoken aloud. It's a fantastic poem.

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rociobelindamendez In reply to Mendedpixie [2013-09-24 00:21:34 +0000 UTC]

I think I will record it soon, along with my other spoken word thank u so much for reading 

& i am glad you liked it xx

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Mendedpixie In reply to rociobelindamendez [2013-09-24 00:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Woot woot! You're welcome!

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rociobelindamendez In reply to Mendedpixie [2013-09-27 04:59:51 +0000 UTC]

ha  

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UtopianWhisper [2013-09-23 17:59:26 +0000 UTC]

You should write music... seriously... if you don't play an instrument learn one... hell even if you cant just use a synth... as you have a knack for lyrical writing, and some of this could easily be adapted.

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rociobelindamendez In reply to UtopianWhisper [2013-09-24 00:23:23 +0000 UTC]

oh dear.. i play piano and i'm learning guitar.. i would loooooooveeee to write a song I'm obsessed with music! haven't tried yet >.< thanks for reading x

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UtopianWhisper In reply to rociobelindamendez [2013-09-24 18:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Today is a good day to start writing one

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rociobelindamendez In reply to UtopianWhisper [2013-09-25 02:36:44 +0000 UTC]

mm it is isn't it !?

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