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Published: 2016-12-11 05:33:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Beyond the Sunpilot/test comic
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Last panel Siggi is best Siggi
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Bad-touch repellent. Also, love Siggi's contribution to the fight.
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Bad-touch repellent: fire edition.
Siggi is a mighty warrior.
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That's some pretty good composition, love the dog at panel six.
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I like to think I'm slowly getting there with composition. (: Glad you like Siggi, she is love. She is life.
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To compare this one to the previous ones, it was much easier to follow so you are definitely improving. Keep it up.
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I think I did better panel spacing here, leads the eye better. Β Thank you so much for the feedback, it's good to know what works and what doesn't.
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