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RobertDanielRyan — Harley Smack Down WIP
Published: 2007-11-30 01:30:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2867; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 33
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Here is another page from the Birds of Prey fan comic. There is a page missing between the Huntress page and this one, but Harley comes to her man's aid after Huntress is laying a major smack down to The Joker. Again there are no backgrounds yet, and I am trying to add a smoke effect because in the second panel Harley is also hitting Huntress with a gas bomb, hence the choking in the third panel. Again it's very unfinished, but I wanted some critiques before I added the finishing touches. Hope you like!
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didnt you re-do this art? u need to upload some current work to blow everyone out of the water!
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Yeah I am still working on the backgrounds but the art on the characters is all done.
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I am not sure I have seen a drag out fight with Huntress and Harley very nice! I like the way you did harley here.
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Thanks! Oh there is plenty more to come trust me haha
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Welcome! Hehehe excellent can't wait!
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Huntress doesn't take very well to being kicked in the head and hit with a gas bomb, we'll just put it that way
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As I said in my previous comment, I'm quite excited to see you finish this comic. As for critiques, its looking very good. Maybe only in the 3rd panel, the one where harley goes to joker's aid, I'm a little confused with how joker is positioned. But as I said, it's all looking very nice, and when you add backgrounds it should look awesome.
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I think you're right. I had some issues when I was inking Joker, and ended up making him look a little more broken than I was going for. I intend to fix that when I redraw this though on the art boards, instead of just 8 1/2 X 11. I should be able to add more details that way too. I'm glad you like it though!
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