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Astral-Chan [2015-10-15 08:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Looks amazing! I love your drawing style and all your drawings are so awesome! You're doing so well at Inktober wow! I could never do it

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Gekigengar [2015-10-14 22:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Requested another critique so fast?
I don't mind

Critique time~!

Actually, there is nothing much to critique here, as you did very well on this one.
I like how you draw both eyes on the correct sizes,
usually most people are not able to get it both on the right size when they just started :> (I surely had a lot of trouble doing 2/3 face back then!)

The neck shape looks weird, and its a bit too long again (if you count the length from where it connects to the head, and the collarbones)
But I like how you get  a good idea on how the neck connects to the collarbones~ (That 2 line in between the neck)

The body is a bit too flat. (www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7W6f_… )
Try drawing the ribcage first every-time you draw a body~

You are doing really well on these portraits and simple poses, and you are getting the general shape and sizes right,
I think its time you experiment on more poses, and get used more to drawing full body~

The way I get used to poses is doing gesture drawing, try it out, it really helped a lot!
You do not have to draw realistically as the models, you can just try to get the poses right in your own style.

Have fun~!

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deathright980 [2015-10-14 21:50:13 +0000 UTC]

I really like the drawing. Your really good

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WigglesPaws [2015-10-14 21:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Marshall leee!!! I'm so sad they don't make a series out of Fiona and Cake ;-;

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frekskun [2015-10-14 21:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Looks awesome

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Significant-Minutes [2015-10-14 20:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Marshall looks so amazing !! I love it

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