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Published: 2008-12-27 16:54:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1272; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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just a simple planet, i hope you all like it
EDIT: removed that big black line on the main planet surface.
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Comments: 32
Fairly much perfect planetary texturing, nicely done. Some suggestions however: perhaps some slight desaturation of the largest apparent planet's atmospheric outer/inner glow as it gradiates towards the umbra would help it look less artifical as it furthers away from the brightest focal point. Or perhaps as it would be more efficient, to simply desaturate or change the tone of it overall slightly so as to blend more consistently with the rest of the image. This being noted only for the sense that it is just a tad too orange - it is a relatively miniscule concern, but it could help further it, seeing as it already is quite great. Also, at the middle-bottom of the same planet, below the river, the perspective of the texture takes on a slightly confused look, between flat and 3-dimensional, reminiscent of a side on airplane/satellite photo of mountains slightly spherised, this could with further manipulation be made less apparent. The only other thing I can mention here is that the seemingly furthest away planet also has a confused perspective - is it actually the furthest away, or in front? This causes some composition issues mainly, and would be fixed if you made your own backdrop scenery and the extended atmospherics of it, or manipulated it further/added more atmospherics to the image to have it seem further away, otherwise you could scale it down a little more as a quick fix. Apart from these suggestions, there doesn't seem to be much if anything else to add - the texturing is fantastic, crispy and sharp where it needs to be and historically rich in its details, good work!
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wow thanks a lot for all the tips and all the criticism, i really apreciate it, thanks a lot
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No problem, glad it was appreciated.
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Great planet texturing, and the shading really gives it a 3D look
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avesome planet texture really, very nice colored and realistic done 
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hey you are totatly right, i all ready sent him a message and im waitting his awnswer, thanks
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i doubt he will answer you... but good luck
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i dont know he isnt that type that he answer to people 
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awesome planet texture, however that black line... even if I imagine it is a kind of highway/structure... I think it would be a way better if you removed that thing
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well, its fixed
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oh yeah, now I can fav it
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Nice work! There seems to be a black line in the texture on the left part of the main planet I'm not sure but I reckon it should not be there
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yeah it should not, but just imagine that as a huge highway or something..
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Ou dude it is nice but remove the black line that was (I guess) a border between two contries
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im to lazy for that XD i dont know what it is.. but i dont think its a border between two countrys, thanks anyway man ^^
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