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RiverSpirit456 — SR Comic: Pg 15

Published: 2017-12-22 07:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 33882; Favourites: 604; Downloads: 41
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Pg 16:

Pg 14: 

Pg 1: SR Comic: Pg1 *Redone*


Original version (for those who still want to read/compare the old pages, I won't delete them) : Scarlet River: Pg 1


Written Version:  Scarlet River P1        The moon was a sliver in the sky, only dimly shining on a winter night. Darkness clung to the snow-covered forest below; deep shadows lying beneath the bare, black branches. Through thick swathes of snow a young cat struggled forward. Her head barely cleared the surface of the cold, white substance, and her brown, silver-striped coat was plastered to her sides, revealing a jutting ribcage. She had been running for many suns and moons now, relying on instinct and a darker resource...one that the kit tried hard to ignore.      
        She took another faltering step, her paws numb.  I have to get help. She thought faintly. Her next paw-step slipped, and she fell into the icy drifts, weakly shivering. Through half-closed eyes, she stared up through the bare arms of the trees. The sky was dark and clouded, the claw-like moon half covered. She struggled to stand, but there was no strength left in her thin, bony le
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Comments: 19

OrionDVee [2020-09-03 16:54:32 +0000 UTC]

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WolfMona134 [2019-04-11 23:32:49 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE LIGHT STAR!

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EchoFlight2431 [2018-01-07 04:38:13 +0000 UTC]

Argh I CAN't WAIT xD
I love it keep it up

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FoxyThePirateFox131 [2017-12-29 22:33:20 +0000 UTC]

I read all the way to 31 on the other one now i have to wait? NUUU ITS TO GOOD

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Nimanao [2017-12-29 15:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Why couldn't I have found this comic later when there are more pages D: It's too good to waiiittt

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MadiMakesBadComics4U [2017-12-28 00:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Be glad that you have a leader like that, my mom  gets mad at me because I'm a shy person and dont like to talk much.. and when I'm nervous the only person in my family that doesn't press me is my great grand ma... i hope she comes here some day because she lives in a different state sooo, Q^Q

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Kityote [2017-12-24 05:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Adults who recognize when a child is obviously nervous and scared and don't pressure them to talk and try to divert attention from them.....are wonderful.

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mystic-eclipse17 [2017-12-23 16:11:13 +0000 UTC]

nooooo i need to see morrrreeeee, i know it takes time but noooooooo, i just love these, i havent read the warriors books but i intend to (better than reading percy jackson for the sixth time)

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sojustme [2017-12-23 15:37:21 +0000 UTC]

well done!
this comic is well made

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Neko-Chan1818 [2017-12-23 01:59:04 +0000 UTC]

I love this comic and the old version

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VarriedMarks [2017-12-22 22:21:47 +0000 UTC]

I seriously really love this comic version :3
so pretty 

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Sunburn-the-Hybrid [2017-12-22 17:24:15 +0000 UTC]

can you link the previous one?

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MoonDoodles7 [2017-12-22 13:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Are you still planning on making the written version, or are you going to just do comic pages now? Just curious ^^ Love this page btw!

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Cypresswind [2017-12-22 12:27:16 +0000 UTC]

That "thank you" breaks me into a million pieces

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Sylveondream In reply to Cypresswind [2017-12-22 12:48:29 +0000 UTC]

A strong leader in deed

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WildberryCherry [2017-12-22 08:53:44 +0000 UTC]

The kind and gentle Lightstar... DATS WHY I LOVEE HER!!!

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TropiCat212 [2017-12-22 08:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Me: *clicks as fast as possible from notifications then attempts to put in favorites before page has even loaded* xD

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LeFABtasticDomino [2017-12-22 07:34:46 +0000 UTC]

I love the layout of this page! 

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Redfeatherisboss123 [2017-12-22 07:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Love Rivers face in the first pannel XD. Great page like always <3

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