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Rivan145th — Everything In Its Right Place
Published: 2013-01-25 01:04:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 26878; Favourites: 1136; Downloads: 187
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Soundtrack: [link]This is my birthday gift for the lovely
She asked me to draw something about thiefshipping ...and I had never done a real thiefshipping image before...well, never did a romantic scene either! The only one I've ever done looked all weird and stuff :/ (...you know the one ç_ç)
Plus I was already drawing my own idea of how their first kiss should have been ([link] ) … aaaand it was anything but romantic, really XP
So that was my first truly romantic scene, and I wanted to try my best… despite the fact that the stream of consciousness is very basic and a little stereotyped; unfortunately this is all I can do with my English knowledge ^^’
But drawing it has been a strange and wonderful experience, and I'm glad I did it.
So thank you for giving me this opportunity Roy, and happy birthday! ^ ^
All the single images on tumblr: [link]
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Once again you have created something that is simply flawless. You have such a gift for creating TRUE artwork. I know you said you haven't done something like this before, but honestly I could not tell. It really touched me. It makes me want to cry. All of your work is absolutely beautiful, and I haven't seen you post anything that has been less than exceptional. The colors flow into each other, and they work effortlessly to create the overall desired effect. It definitley goes to show that you can create something deep and poetic from something as simple as manga.
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oh my god, i love it it is, amazing and cute and really touching. It is almost certaintly my favorite thiefshipping art i've ever seen, i know you've never tried to make a romantic scene before but let me just say that you succeeded! it tugged my heartstrings and it was absolutleyt adorable. the expressions on their faces makes it all the better and oh my god i cannot express how much it amazed me . you did an amazing job and i just can't get over it, i love it! its definitely going on my favs and i just love this couple too but its hard to make something romantic for them and you nailed it on your first try!
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Thank you so much, lovely critique! ^.^
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I rarely do critiques, but it kind of saddens me to see your artwork getting a load of comments, that aren't even sentences. And your picture deserves definitely more than a bit of drooling and fangirl-orgasms.
It may sound strange, but the one thing that sparked my interest, had not been your drawings in the first place, but the text accompanying those: It might be nothing but a stream of consciousness, but you are pretty eloquent and are able to express emotions and thoughts that run so wonderfully well with these pictures. Even without them, it would be a good poem, even if english might not be your mother tongue and indicates that you must be quite literate in your native idiom.
You've managed to write/draw romance, that would've turned into some sappy, mushy mess at the hands of many other artists, so, thank you for creating something with feel AND thought without going downhill too some stereotypical fangirl fluff.
I like the concept of the odyssey through time, always on the hunt for something/someone that might've been there all the time and free to choose. That's kinda cool. XD~
As for the visualization: What transports your internal monologue so well, are the gazes and gestures between those two: There's nothing left to be said and as your title suggests 'everything is in it's right place'. (off topic: Do you like Radiohead? I secretly hope you choose your title because of that great song! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="
You have a fine hand for contrasts and it's fun to see how you maneuver through the whole palette from the darkest purple to blueish white. Even the neon green highlights on the last panel are fitting almost harmonic into the setting. There might be digital works out there that are more refined, but the rough edge of your coloring only adds to the appeal imo.
So, to sum it all up into one, final synopsis: With artworks like this, it's fun to be into anime/manga, because it proves that fanart can be more that fanservice and nice colors. And it's always a relief to discover, that there are people out there who are able to fuse poetic and visual topics. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="19" height="19" alt="
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I’ve appreciated this critique so much 
It can sound stupid, but this comic for me is important; I’ve really related with Bakura while I was drawing… not for the love story, but for his wrong choices. I’ve been in a lot of sad and horrible relations, so it was supposed to be a frivolous and funny strip, or even a gag; but when I’ve drawn Bakura’s face I thought “That’s it! That’s how I should feel if I want to stay with someone”. I don’t know, but it made me understand something. There were a lot of thing that I've chosen but that I didn't truly wanted
I think this picture change me a bit
…Eh eh, sorry for my unnecessary confession XD
And of course, I was listening to that song while I was drawing this
So thank you so much :’)
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Then I'm glad I'd been able to make you a bit happy.
Thanks for the background info, now it's obvious why your comic strip is so very intense and personal. Producing art is always a bit of personal strip tease, but it can also be very cathartic, can't it? I hope, that you've come to your own conclusions and solutions. What did you write: You've always been free. Free to choose whatever you want.
And, dear god, here I thought I'm the only noob to name her pictures after Radiohead songs. I guess this sounds really, really strange, but I like you.
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THIS.... This is gorgeous. My God. You as an artist are so amazing it is not even something i can put into words. The only thing i have to have changed is the wording. Some of it is a little odd, could be smoother. But other than that, dang. DAUM!
Plus the fact that millions of fan girls are for this couple/pairing, and this is the most perfect vision of them. You put it into pictures and made it a reality for the fangirls and maybe fan boys of the YGO community.
AMAZING. Beautiful! BRAVA! BRAVISIMA!!!
You keep doing what you do and good things shall happen!
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Thank you so much for the critique
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of course!
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that made me cry...
gods I love your YGO artworks and comics
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this is gorgeous holy shit i love the atmosphere to its this is honestly such a good comic and i love it sm
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BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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This comic...I knew it would be gorgeous, but I was not prepared for the feels. The emotion conveyed in their faces, in the poses, is nothing short of fantastic.
And that last panel, rrrgh it makes my heart clench up! I don't usually even thiefship! But (Yami) Bakura is my absolute favorite and I always thought there was more to him than just an obsession (or worse, a dark god posing as human this whole time). You have conveyed, in just a few panels, what I've been struggling to write for months, even years.
*wistful sigh*
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This is GORGEOUS. I'm not really into thiefshipping right now (my current obsession is hetalia), but this has inspired me to go scour fanfic archives for thiefshipping, so thank you for giving me something to do.
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I just favorited this . . . I don't even sail on the great Thiefshipping shebang, but this is just incredible. Their expressions are so unguarded, it's beautiful. Definitely one of my favorites, literally and figuratively. You did it so well, so exquisitely . . .
You basically just captured my heart. And I get the feeling that I'm not getting it back anytime soon.
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...Welp...I had no need for my feels anyway
Loved this! X3
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This is absolutely stunning! Beautiful technique, love the shading and the story is beautiful! Amazing work! <3
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I can now rest in peace knowing everything is put in balance now
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After looking at this for like 20 times *SNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFF*
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I just happen to look at it all the time, I'm crying cuz arrrrrg why they die no no no no why bakura whyyyyyyyyyy anyway they sure look super good *-* why the anime wasn't drawn by you XDD
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Omg.... Stop!
I had to literally stop at each panel thingy, stare at the awesome quality of it, and then just die a little inside :3
So awesome and cute
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I almost cried after reading looking at this. So sweet and has such amazing detail.
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its simply awesome! Beautiful text! Lovely style! Soo kind, with rough lines at same stime! the rythm is perfect! lots of felling, the colors... ok i think i said enought! wonderful piece, artist!
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O MY SWEET GOD!!! this pairing is hot hehe plus you style is amazing amazing work hun keep it up X3
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I already see this for the second time and I still shed a tear ;A; And the first time I just started crying :C
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This made me cry, thanks.
Jk, it's beautiful. Well, frigg, I wasn't joking about the crying part. I legit teared up.
Teach me to thiefship like yoooooou!
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Oh. My. GOD. I love the way you draw them
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I totally agree with you, I just couldn't get over how perfect his expression was. It's amazing!
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Increadible comic, short but very deep in character for Bakura.
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For some reason I just love how Bakura's shoulders are slumped in panel four, especially with Marik emphasizing it by holding up his head. 
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this is truly the most beautiful fanart staring them both I have ever seen
So much emotion, it makes me want to cry. Very amazing work you did there.
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sooo cute i think this pairing is best ever in yugioh soo cool how you do the art as well
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