Comments: 32
RainbowLii [2010-09-27 19:55:36 +0000 UTC]
(/stuffs into fan girl box with the rest of my collection)
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
you didn't see anything
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Ririkaze In reply to RainbowLii [2010-09-27 19:57:56 +0000 UTC]
YOU
I'M SO JEALOUS OF YOU
YOU HAVE A LIFE; MEANING I HAVEN'T SEEN YA IN A WHILE
;w; You were missed~
(/I'm takin' Yuuki away from you... Lord knows what you're gonna do to him xD)
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MystykNess [2010-09-23 20:36:36 +0000 UTC]
Pfff, WHY did this not pop up in my messages? >:C
Aaaaannyways~ He looks aweshome~! <33
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Ririkaze In reply to MystykNess [2010-09-23 23:23:15 +0000 UTC]
I dunno~ xDDD
dA is weird, as always. :3
Thanks!!
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MystykNess In reply to Ririkaze [2010-09-23 23:23:55 +0000 UTC]
XD Oh well~
You're welcome! ^w^
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contra-rawr [2010-09-21 05:46:53 +0000 UTC]
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Hey, I’m Kiki of OtakuDreamers, here to respond to your critique. Since I’m not a premium member myself, I can’t click the “critique” button, but I’ll do my best. Hopefully, I won’t be too harsh, and hopefully I’ll be able to help. If I wasn’t that helpful in explaining, please tell me and I’ll be more than happy to be try to clarify myself
The first thing I notice is eyes and the font. (I’m such a font geek, it’s crazy...) anyways, about the eyes: the best thing about them? The contrast. I’m really in love with the near-black parts compared to the near-white parts of the eyes. It gives the eyes a lot more of a 3D look to it, which leads me to the lighting. There seems to be two sources of lighting here. One light source is a full frontal light source (aka he’s yuuki-san is facing the light source), while another light source is coming from behind (aka he’s facing away from the light source). His head seems to have frontal lighting, while anything below his shoulders seems to have back lighting. Although it’s very plausible to have two conflicting lighting sources, it wasn’t carried out correctly in this case. It’s a lot easier coloring wise to have either one or the other kind of lighting, and it’s a lot easier to have full frontal lighting. (which is why I’ll explain how to edit this so that it’ll have frontal lighting, and I’ll link you to this amazingly helpful tutorial (for me, at least) that shows how to do both front and back lighting.)
to have frontal lighting, all you’d need to edit is anything below the shoulders. In this case, you’ll be putting shadows around the outline of his body, and highlights/lighter color at the chest and shoulders, which protrude out more in comparison to the rest of the torso. Here’s the link to the tutorial: [link]
more about the lighting: he kinda looks flat... why? It’s because of contrast. Remember what I said earlier about the eyes and the tons of contrast? That also applies to everything else. Take a look at this [link] . Let’s concentrate on Ganon’s long flowy hair right now the lightest part is near white, and the darkest part is near black. What I’m trying to say is that the great contrast gives the figure a lot of depth and looks really 3D because of it. Now, let’s switch our focus to Ganon’s nose. The tip of it is nearly white, and the darkest area is nearly black. Again, the great contrast gives the figure a lot of depth. Basically, contrast gives the illusion of depth. (p.s.: if you were trying to go for a more cartoony look, then sorry about that. to get good lighting for a manga/anime style that’s similar to anime, look again at the tutorial I linked earlier )
Okay, proportions. The only things that are really off are the head size/shape and the neck size. The head should be more circular, and perhaps less angular. Although angular is part of the anime style, the head right now is rather long. What I do when I draw heads is that I draw a circle (note: not an oval, though! Circle! ), then I add the jaw line. (usually an upside-down triangle that has rounded off edges and slightly curved sides)
Again, I really like the eyes, because of the contrast. In addition, it’s great to know that you’ve started a new coloring style! keep it up!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
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Krikascini [2010-09-20 23:15:33 +0000 UTC]
0.0
I'll say something later ok? *sniffles*
Right now I'm too proud of you.
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Ririkaze In reply to Krikascini [2010-09-20 23:32:08 +0000 UTC]
Gah, senpai, do you really mean that? ;//w//;
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Krikascini In reply to Ririkaze [2010-09-20 23:34:14 +0000 UTC]
Yes~~ : D
The greatness in the color of this strikes me as heavenly... = )
When will I be able to fest on those promised manga pages?
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Ririkaze In reply to Krikascini [2010-09-20 23:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I'm very glad then <333
Soon, very soon. ;D
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sakurasamichan [2010-09-20 06:03:25 +0000 UTC]
HOMGHOMGHOMG I love it!!! <333333333 I can't wait to see him in Windswept!! :3
Man, I LOVE HIS SHYNESS. AND BLUSH. //lovelove
You are getting better and better!! <3 Keep it up! ;u;
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Ririkaze In reply to sakurasamichan [2010-09-20 22:20:03 +0000 UTC]
HOMGHOMGHOMG THANK YOU! 8DDD
Ah, you think I'm getting better? ;3; my younger, awesomer kohai is praising me! How should I feel?
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sakurasamichan In reply to Ririkaze [2010-09-21 02:20:09 +0000 UTC]
NYAAA YOUR WELCOME!! <333333
Yes yes!~ I really do! <3
Nyaaa!~ But my older, awesomest sempai deserves the praise! :3
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terra13 [2010-09-20 02:55:20 +0000 UTC]
Aww he looks so shy for his close - up xD I like the design and I seriously can't wait to read more of Windswept!
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Ririkaze In reply to terra13 [2010-09-20 22:18:47 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thanks so much! I really appreciate your support. So very much. <333
Thanks again, Terra~ 8D
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Ririkaze In reply to terra13 [2010-09-20 22:55:19 +0000 UTC]
Okies, Steph! 8D
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bbqbert [2010-09-19 20:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, good job~
Awww, I like his description! He reminds me of a friend I had in Japan who was super cool and slick, but he was also a big anime fan and gamer--two seemingly huge opposites!! Love it, and pretty unique~ In manga we tend to see the typical nerdy character getting the role of otaku~ Time to break the stereotype~~~!
I like the character design a lot! Love the white hair with bright blue eyes combination. Very gorgeous!! I also like how his hair sweeps over, too! It's got some good dimensions and depth! Great work with that~
The coloring style works very well, I'm pretty impressed! I especially like how it looks in certain parts of his clothing (the blue, especially). Very nice! I suppose the only part that I see that looks off to me is the light lines within the darkest shaded parts--the creases of his arms and the lines around the strap. It looks kinda like those areas are glowing! Color lineart is good, but for reason here, it kinda distracts me??
Anyhoo, gorgeous! And I can't wait to see how your style evolves as you continue to work on/edit Windswept! YAYAY~~~
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bbqbert [2010-09-19 15:08:37 +0000 UTC]
*coughcough* Put in TG... *coughcoughcough*
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Ririkaze In reply to bbqbert [2010-09-19 19:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Aye aye! <333
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EirilovesShuichi [2010-09-19 12:58:14 +0000 UTC]
He looks really good darlin!!! He sunds interesting too! can't wait to see him in Windswept!
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Ririkaze In reply to EirilovesShuichi [2010-09-19 19:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! C: Y'know, when I was taking a break from coloring your commission I sorta made the sketch for this. My point is that I'm almost done with your picture!! 8DDD
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EirilovesShuichi In reply to Ririkaze [2010-09-20 05:47:15 +0000 UTC]
wOOt!!! Finally!!!! I've been waiting forever to hear that!!!
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Ririkaze In reply to EirilovesShuichi [2010-09-20 20:47:57 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure you were! xD I'm pretty excited about it. I mean, I started the sketch several months ago, lineart'd in a newer style, and colored it totally awesome! So it's like style progression 8D
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