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Rhiss — An Amazingly Mare
Published: 2013-04-14 03:56:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description She’s an amazingly beautiful mare,
Black mane wreathes a lovely face.
I somehow managed not to stare,
But I certainly couldn’t keep pace.
She’s an amazingly beautiful mare,
And yet, we’re on a walk.

She’s an amazingly warm-hearted mare,
Concerned with my lonely life.
I can’t imagine why she’d care.
That I’ve no hope of finding a wife.
She’s an amazingly warm-hearted mare,
It seems she’s warming mine.

She’s an amazingly mischievous mare,
Each word makes me quickly blush!
She’s saying things I’d never dare!
And my heart, like a fool, starts to rush!
She’s an amazingly mischievous mare,
And I am easily teased.

She’s an amazingly sensitive mare,
Runs off at a word misplaced.
She up and left without a glare,
And back to the forest she raced.
She’s an amazingly sensitive mare,
And here am I, afraid.
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Comments: 3

toneno [2013-04-14 04:00:08 +0000 UTC]

-melts- Uuwaaaaa, this was overloaded with sweetness, I'm so glad I caught it on the DA homepage. ;~;

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Rhiss In reply to toneno [2013-04-14 04:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you did too. A poet's focus should be on his poetry, not himself, but it's always nice to hear someone appreciate something you've written!

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toneno In reply to Rhiss [2013-04-14 04:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes, I have enjoyed this muchly, thank you for sharing it with us!

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