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Retro-Sushi — Pepper and Pals!
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Published: 2017-07-20 08:51:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 478; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 3
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My smol diner son Pepper hanging our with Diver and TVee!Diver(c)Retro Sushi
Pepper(c) Retro Sushi
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I would say this is a great start, and could become a nice piece of work if completed. The sketch is pretty neat, with some tweaking of facial expressions and minor anatomy/perspective glitches (which I must admit took me a while to even notice since they won't disturb the overall feeling of the work), it would make a nice line art and from that to a completed piece. I am not familiar with your earlier work, but this looks nice and clean to me, generally if cleaned up a bit more you would already have a proper lineart. I would pay attention to faces though, especially proportions (even in a clearly comic styled piece like this I find it paramount for the overall look of the piece). In the end of this writing I finally was able to realize what bothered me with the character on the left: his leg seems to stretch too far back comparing to two other characters (or in this case it actually seems like he has a stumpy leg to me). Regardless, I would love to see a finished result of this one. Keep up the good work! ^^
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These are cool! I love the way you draw Mech bodies.
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