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renshirenshii In reply to KamaneMikito [2017-01-07 07:33:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, I still learn though

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KamaneMikito In reply to renshirenshii [2017-01-07 08:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, your welcome. Although I must ask now, are you asking for some constructive criticism? (not saying i'm a better artist just things I noticed that you can or not mind in your next piece).

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renshirenshii In reply to KamaneMikito [2017-01-07 08:54:26 +0000 UTC]

of course if you don't mind. I'm still looking for the better style and technique, and what is wrong with my works. your criticism and advice will really help me

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KamaneMikito In reply to renshirenshii [2017-01-07 23:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... In that case.
The hair is pretty well done but the hairline is odd especially for the angle since it would appear your character is facing down and towards the left. The hairline stands as if he's looking up. Try changing the curve on the hairline so that's more forward and closer to the eyes (i'm trying to word this but tell me if i need to clarify).
Next thing up is the lineart. It's a rollercoaster. It looks fan-freaking-tastic at some points and a little blander on other parts. I would suggest giving it a little more definition and play w/ lighting and shadows. On the arm in the front the shadows are blended onto the arm, try making the lineart stand out a bit more just to give the arm more definition. As for the color play w/ lighting and shadows to bolster the lineart there.
Hopefully this will be of use in your next works!
Good luck!

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renshirenshii In reply to KamaneMikito [2017-01-08 12:20:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for your advice!! 
I will try harder 

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renshirenshii In reply to MariaGirina [2017-01-07 07:33:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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