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Published: 2013-05-06 09:10:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 8016; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 7
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Description Hey, guys, finished another chapter while I was extremely stressed out this weekend, help me unwind and relax, here you guys go, Chapter 7.

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"We're going to need Peach if we want the last Warrior Star, Mario, come on!!!" Trus T tugged at the plumber's sleeve, pulling him towards the carnage going on at Princess Daisy's castle. (Fighting goombas, koopas, magikoopas, bloopers, embers, koopatrols, and shy guys along the way.)

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"Mario, what's the meaning of this?!? Why is the princess out here, in the middle of nowhere?!? And why is your brother wearing a dress?!?" Bowser snapped. "You're the worst bodyguard EVER!!!" Mario and company busted into the throne room, seeing both Peach and Luigi, tied up, held captive by the koopa king.

"Whaaack-hoo, tying up people isn't very nice!!!" Whacka smiled at Bowser, and the rest of the group prepared for the fight.

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After the battle, Bowser and his army retreat, leaving the group and the captives alone, Iin complete silence. Mario unties the princesses.

"There's no time, Mario!!! The last Warrior Star Iis somewhere on the grounds of the abandoned Flora Village Carnival!!! You have to go!" Peach ushered the group out of the castle, as the sun began setting, and the stars came out.

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"It may take us a while to find the last warrior star, we dont even have a lead as to where it is!!!" Trus T read through his book, frantic for information. Ahead, a large, castle-esque building loomed up towards the smokey, foggy night sky. Almost instinctively, Mario made a dash for the front door.

A magical lock was placed on Iit, with two visible keyholes etched into the door's fancy frame.

"So, then... We just need to find where those keys are." Koopky looked around.

"Such a big park..." Flitter floated by overhead. "What happens if we never find them?" Mario scratched at the back of his head, heading towards a glass fortune teller's booth.

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The red hero pressed a small, golden coin into the machine, and an automated voice played from within it.

"The ghastly hands of shadow and light, have set the future ahead in flight."

A small scrap of paper was ejected from the machine, with the words, "track and wheel" written on it in a deep, red ink.

"Well, that's obvious, its telling us where those keys are!!!" Trus T pondered.

"They're attractions..." Zapz spoke up... "The roller coaster tracks and the ferris wheel..."

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The group makes their way up to the top of the highest hill on the roller coaster track. (Fighting boos and the ghost versions of enemies along the way) At the top, they see a white figure, standing alone. He turns around, facing the crew with drooped, depressed eyes. "OOooOoOooOooo, you want this key? OoooOOoooOooooeeeEEeeeeEEEeeeEeoOooO, then you'll have to fight me!"

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After the battle, the ghost drops his key on the tracks, and Mario grabs it. The ghost evaporates into nothing.

"Well, that was odd..." Droop speaks up.

"ARF, ARF ARFARF ARF MARF RAWRF LARF!!!" Chomper bounces around, reminding Mario of the other key.

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The group treks across the park, finding thmselves at the foot of the giant ferris wheel. They climb up it, reaching the top. Standing at the peak of the wheel, a black figure greets them, grinning mischievously. "OOooooOoooOoOoo, fight for my key!!!" The ghost chants, as the group readies for a battle.

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After the battle, the ghost drops his key an evaporates into nothingness as well, and Mario picks it up.

"Time to get the last star, Mario." Scorch cheers.

"Perfect timin, too." Koopky points out, at the castle, where the building's torches had all lighted themselves, and the front doors began to glow.

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Mario placed the keys Iinto their locks, and they fell off, causing the doors to swing open, revealing the dark, creepy castle.

Inside, mirrors lined every wall, inanimate objects moved around, staircases shifted, and floors danced. Still, the group made their way to the top of the castle. (Fighting magiblots, sparkies, podoboos, duplighosts, ghost goombas, dark boos, bill blasters, swoopers, clefts, bulky bob-ombs, and clubbas along the way.)

At the top, the two ghosts floated, side by side, waiting for Mario.

"OooOoooooooOooo, we'll never give you our star!!!" They moaned at the same time, and attacked.

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After the two ghosts are defeated, they melt Iinto shadow blobs on the floor, and twist together, reforming as one giant, creepy voodoo doll ghost. "WeEEeeeeEEee wIiiIiiiLlL NEEEEVERRR gIIIVvvVVvvVVeEeEeeeEeE yoOooOooOu our stAaaAaaAAAaaaAaaAaaArRrRrRrr!!!"

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After the battle, the giant ghost begins shining from within, and bursts Iinto smoke, leaving the two ghost brothers, falling to the floor. They get up, and sink back into the shadows of the ground, leaving a shining purple star stone in their wake.

"Yesss! Its ours, Mario!!!" Trus T shouts, excited, as Mario walks up to the star, picking it up.

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YOU GOT A WARRIOR STAR!!!
END OF CHAPTER!!!
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The scene shifts to Daisy and Peasely, who are Iinterrupted by a Shroob Commander and two Shroob grunts entering their room.

"Well, princess, our plans to find the relics have failed..." The commander smirked. "And now we suspect Mario will be coming here, next... which means its time to set the stage. You'll be coming with us, now." With a snap of his fingers, the Shroob Commander ordered the two Shroobs to tie Princess Daisy up, and carry her off.

"You, Peasely, have caused us enough trouble. Tatanga orders I keep you under lockdown to ensure you won't get in our way..." Peasely raised his fists, but before he could strike, the Commander blew his whistle, rushing two Shroobs to his side, to tie the prince up. They carried him off, to an underground cellar, where the Commander held him locked in.

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The scene shifts again, to Princess Peach, who is tending to her injured guards. Luigi randomly walks about the castle, (you get to control him throughout all of this) finds an underground hallway, leading to a giant, steel door. He accidentally opens it, finding the entire room inside to be a giant, ancient stone shrine, with a dial in the center of seven surrounding pillars, each with the cut-out shape of a star in them. He runs back through the castle, yelling for Peach, and grabs her arm, pulling her down to witness the room for herself. She gasps, staying silent for a while, until one comment from her breaks it.

"Mario needs to see this..."

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Oh my gosh, the end of the story is getting closer and closer all the time!!! Ahhhhhhh, I dont want it to end!!! Ill get around to writing the final chapter soon, but until then, everyone, please enjoy.

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The World at End concept belongs to me, , but all characters related to the Super Mario series belong to Nintendo.
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Comments: 14

Kermitthefrog223456 [2015-04-04 13:53:46 +0000 UTC]

Now for the final battle!

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nintendotophomestuck [2014-10-13 22:08:20 +0000 UTC]

This is definitely my favorite chapter!
The idea of it taking place in an amusement park is so exciting, I can imagine playing this on my Wii U or 3DS (whichever one you meant for this fan game to be on ) and walking around the amusement park, searching for the keys! Ahhh I want to play this right now!

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Renleixue In reply to nintendotophomestuck [2014-10-13 23:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Awww, reading your comments brings me back to when I first made this, the nostalgia feels so good. :') Yeah, I have to say, this chapter was one of my favorite concepts from this, too, although I could've done so much better, now. xD But hey, that's progression for ya. I never really planned what platform this WOULD'VE been on, I assume it would've probably been a handheld, though, just with how much MORE expansive Mirror of Infinity turned out. Thanks for all the compliments, though, they really do make me feel great about my work. ^^

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darklord86 [2014-07-31 07:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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Soupgeist [2013-05-26 04:04:14 +0000 UTC]

I've read through all of the chapters now, and I have to say, the story is excellent, and this is definitely my favorite chapter so far. The setting, the characters and plot are simply oozing the Paper Mario essence. This is brilliant work - keep it up!

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Renleixue In reply to Soupgeist [2013-05-26 05:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god, you like my work. AND you favorite my stuff. Holy shit. Holy shit HOLY SHIT im gonna pass out, holy fuck my heart's pounding. O.M.G. seriously, you're so freaking nice, THANK you for the compliments, I have like NO words right now to express my graditude. Just... THANK you!!!!!!

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Soupgeist In reply to Renleixue [2013-05-27 15:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, well it's nothing, really! I really like the work you put into each chapter and the creativity of all the bosses, and it's one of the most complete fanmade Paper mario games I've seen here.

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Renleixue In reply to Soupgeist [2013-05-27 16:28:26 +0000 UTC]

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OHHHHMYGODDDDDDDD AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! >w< That comment, RIGHT there, that one, omg, I feel so... So accomplished!!! I seriously can't believe you actually LIKE my story, holy shit, thank you, thank you so muchhh!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im like going crazy right now, holy shit this is like a dream come true. Dude, you're fucking AWESOME.

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PolishedBrain [2013-05-06 13:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Great chapter once again!The bosses look pretty cool and I like the setting of an abandonned carnival!Awesome job, ma'am!Although there were a few spelling mistakes here and there, I really liked this chapter!

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-05-06 14:03:52 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha, oh my god, I typed this all out on my tablet, at 2 in the morning, ughhhh fuck my biggest fear was that everything was gonna be spelled TERRIBLY, looks like my worst nightmares have come true. DX Bleh, I'll fix it later, I JUST woke up, and I'm too tired to realize anything.

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PolishedBrain In reply to Renleixue [2013-05-06 14:08:08 +0000 UTC]

It's okay, the story is great anyway.Can't wait for Ch.8!

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-05-06 14:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Dawwww, you're really TOO nice, hun. x3 I know, oh my gosh, I can't wait to finish the main storyline!!!

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PolishedBrain In reply to Renleixue [2013-05-06 14:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks.You're also a nice person.

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SMDKFan [2013-05-06 12:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Poor Weegie Stuck in a dress.

Luigi, Go find your brother and Go with him to rescue your maiden!!!!

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