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Roqi [2012-06-06 09:10:36 +0000 UTC]
Well. xD I know neither of the things you're referencing here, so I can't comment on the mashup itself, but...
You're getting so much better at coloring, I'm having difficulties believing you still don't have a tablet. o-o But as for the art, I really think you should put more effort into constructing your drawings. There's those kinds of mistakes you could have easily spotted if you sketched properly, like the neck being too long and the right shoulder being off.
This:
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and this (mostly #2):
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Study it. Follow it. I demand it. D:<
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Relaxn In reply to Roqi [2012-06-06 23:10:03 +0000 UTC]
I know. x3
Thanks! <3 That airbrush tool really helps the shading process. And it's super fun, too!
The shoulder was a mistake; I was trying to make it droop like it does in the picture I was referencing and I failed. The neck, I made long on purpose as it's too long in the picture from the anime. n_n; Might have overdone that part a bit, though. I wouldn't have used the painful-looking position if it wasn't for the fact that I was trying to make my picture as accurate to the from the anime as possible, so as to properly show the similarities between the two characters.
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Roqi In reply to Relaxn [2012-06-06 23:20:58 +0000 UTC]
Well, anime rarely makes a good reference, I guess. But I see where you're coming from with not wanting to stray from the source material.
Still stand by my point >3>
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Roqi In reply to Relaxn [2012-06-07 09:42:38 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty then xD
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Relaxn In reply to Roqi [2012-06-07 15:25:59 +0000 UTC]
Oops. I didn't mean to come off as ungrateful. x: I DO appreciate the critique, and your critique certainly wasn't unfounded; the neck/shoulder area IS off.
Sorry. ;_;
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Roqi In reply to Relaxn [2012-06-07 17:49:37 +0000 UTC]
Nah, you didn't sound ungrateful ^^ I do understand.
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Relaxn In reply to Roqi [2012-06-07 21:22:10 +0000 UTC]
Just making sure. n_n; I didn't want you to think I was shooting your advice down.
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