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Blanke [2006-10-14 11:31:49 +0000 UTC]
I'd say you did an excellent job of coloring this one. The shadows on his face are well defined, and I really like the clean, multi-layered shading on his hair and jacket. I think that would look even better if there were a few white highlights along the zipper, to make it look more metallic. As for the drawing, the lineart is very clean, and what catches my eye the most as far as that goes, is the varied line weights around the edges of the coat, and the way his face still stays well centered at a 3/4 angle. (that may not sound like much, but I know it can be hard to do that consistently; skewed faces is one of the most common human errors. ) However, the perspective on his shoulders looks rather awkward; they would better match the angle of his head and neck if his right shoulder was the one that looked closer.
One more question, just so I can get a better understanding of this- are his arms at his sides, or are they behind his back?
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reflections91 In reply to Blanke [2006-10-14 14:28:54 +0000 UTC]
Hm... you're right... even I can't tell if the arms are at his sides or behind his back...
Thank you so much for your comment! I'll try to improve my positioning for the next time I do something like this...
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Blanke In reply to reflections91 [2006-10-14 19:34:35 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Thanks for posting on my forum! As for those arms, a good rule of thumb is to have the the minimum thickness for the arms be the same as the width of the neck; if that helps.
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reflections91 In reply to Blanke [2006-10-14 23:18:59 +0000 UTC]
yep, that helps ^_^. I lean something every day...
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chocopeople [2006-09-09 13:28:13 +0000 UTC]
Haru look so cute!
i don't really see any faults that i can comment on!
^_^
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oceansky [2006-08-20 14:45:44 +0000 UTC]
aaa Haru looks so handsome here lol nice!
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ChibiAurora [2006-08-15 20:24:58 +0000 UTC]
That is awesome! Haru's great XD
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reflections91 In reply to ChibiAurora [2006-08-15 21:07:19 +0000 UTC]
yep! I like haru best from Fruits Basket ^_^
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Blue-Seventy [2006-08-15 15:48:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow, awesome Haru!!! I love the coloring and effects! The fur ruff is very striking - it kind of looks like the ocean waves in old Japanese paintings. Very cool!
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reflections91 In reply to Endless-Labyrinth [2006-07-26 22:04:03 +0000 UTC]
lol I wish I was less impatient... But I keep finding faults with it, and keep NOT finishing it... so yea, I can't CG efficiently... And I can't understand you greater beings who can do a gazillion CGs and have them looking like masterpieces...
*sigh*... gotta work on clothing folds... yea, I was questioning myself whether or not they looked like ribcages etched out... -.-
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reflections91 In reply to Endless-Labyrinth [2006-07-27 14:19:27 +0000 UTC]
omg... dA makes me feel so bad... xD
yea, when I saw blackeri's art, I just wanted to print out every single one of them...
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Endless-Labyrinth In reply to reflections91 [2006-07-27 17:03:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I know how you feel >_< Especially when all these people have like a million pageviews and we only have a few hundreds T_T
Yes, sometimes I obsess about pageviews XD
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reflections91 In reply to Endless-Labyrinth [2006-07-28 00:45:32 +0000 UTC]
lol... you have more than me, xD... I have ONE hundred... singular... xD.
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Endless-Labyrinth In reply to reflections91 [2006-07-28 19:59:08 +0000 UTC]
lol... but you don't update as much as I do (until recently, that is) XD
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reflections91 In reply to Endless-Labyrinth [2006-07-28 21:25:41 +0000 UTC]
true, I mass-updated in January though... like 3 pix per day...>.<... maybe I should even them out...xD
I'm not very good at marketing...-.-
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