Comments: 335
Trixie-J-Lulamoon [2015-02-10 17:55:38 +0000 UTC]
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Bon-Bon.
The comic made me giggle, and that's a good sign, for a comedy comic, but there wasn't a joke that specifically made the proverbial "LOL" for me. Then again I am quite jaded! ^^ Ignore the pretty stars to the right, they are meaningless for comics.
One of the things I like the most about this is the over the top expressions of the characters. With these cartoon styles exaggerated expressions are underused, and loose value for it. But I think you hit the nail right on the head, mostly with Lyra. Like when she hides behind the edge of the comic, or when she starts screaming. A lot of comic creators like to rip off one style where it looks like they are always yelling. So props for not falling into that hole.
I see you really focused on the facial expressions, since for the most part the ponies are draw from the neck up. And while Lyra went from Happy to scared to embarrassed, this bat-pony was bemused or annoyed through the whole thing, and you managed to give her several expressions to express the same emotion over all.
So, overall, good job.
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gamer173 [2018-08-29 03:19:51 +0000 UTC]
Love it. Love the artwork, and I love the snappy comeback.
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citytoon [2018-01-19 22:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Art
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Man-Child [2017-10-09 23:33:12 +0000 UTC]
I know this is all in fun, but as a genuine chiropterophile (and one time member of Bat Conservation International), I hated to see bats in Equestria portrayed as "vampires" (even if they only drink fruit juice). But what really bothered me was making Flutterbat wild, feral, giving her fangs (actual vampire bats break the skin with incisors; other bats have cuspids to eat food quickly while in the air), and giving her red, slitted pupils like a cat (so far as I know, no bat has pupils like that).
Anyway, I don't want to make a federal case out of it, but this pic was a good place to vent.
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SeraChrysanthemum [2017-04-19 18:34:32 +0000 UTC]
Very cute and funny! Makes a good point. Lyra probably just reads about humans all day.
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PineyCreek [2017-04-04 18:47:51 +0000 UTC]
Can't tell you the number of times I've had people come up to me and speak Spanish because they assume I don't speak English... what's worse, I'm Asian. So, yeah, I've been in the batpony's shoes.
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bladevstwilight In reply to PineyCreek [2020-01-30 11:32:56 +0000 UTC]
I know your comment is old .. So sorry for bothering you .. But this interests me on the fact you are Asian and people tried speaking Spanish to you for assuming you don't speak English.. So need to ask am I missing some odd random fact here? .. Like is/was Spanish popular in some Asian country somehow or is it something else ?
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PineyCreek In reply to bladevstwilight [2020-02-09 09:12:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm half-Asian, half-white. So people are often very confused by what ethnicity I am.
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TartarusFire [2017-01-29 22:53:56 +0000 UTC]
Aww.. poor lyra, poor cute bap.
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River-Road [2016-12-17 17:15:50 +0000 UTC]
Well, I can't say she's completely at fault, going by Equestrian logic. Lyra got her special talent and likely occupation right there on her flank, while bat ponies don't get cutie marks in the common fancanon (and if they do, it would be covered by their wings most of the time).
Nice comic, though love her face in the seventh panel.
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VentralPlace58 [2016-10-21 19:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Lyra: oh...I do bon bon a lot....
Undecided: I MEANT YOUR JOB!
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Eli101gamer [2016-10-05 22:16:51 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnddd, DAB
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rautamiekka [2016-07-29 09:40:37 +0000 UTC]
I don't agree with racism. It's not like Lyra said or even implied something like 'fuck off, your kind ain't welcome here', she just got surprised. Rather, if this is all it takes to be racist, accidentally or intentionally, something is wrong.
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bladevstwilight In reply to rautamiekka [2020-01-30 11:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Yeah old comment but heres the deal even in 2016 a lot of people atleast online types and even random recorded people in the real world sees still like the comments here as racism and its only gotten worse over the years with more of those types showing up that sees every little possible thing as racist ...
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LW9510 [2016-07-08 12:26:44 +0000 UTC]
Thats why hide it wait i am... not .n
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SketchingRich [2016-06-24 05:49:53 +0000 UTC]
So it's pony racism??? The weird part is I read this and I ain't no brony
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Vore-Seeker [2016-06-12 00:34:11 +0000 UTC]
Bat Ponies should be staked in the heart.
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Tenjen [2016-04-19 11:23:02 +0000 UTC]
eats her own hoof
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jjboy04 [2016-02-26 03:16:09 +0000 UTC]
Cringe colab here bat pony comes!
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rainbowcooky [2016-02-08 02:42:23 +0000 UTC]
I save any funny MLP pictures, comics, etc. I stumble upon to my tablet. This is definitely getting saved to my tablet.
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Articunos-Bitch [2016-02-04 21:37:18 +0000 UTC]
All bat ponies(including Saberhorns and Nightwalkers) must submit to bone cracking hugs upon entering city limits.
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FoxMcfat [2016-02-04 20:28:10 +0000 UTC]
i think she is really cute -3- those lil fangs are just too lovable <3
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dsp2003 [2016-01-06 20:28:51 +0000 UTC]
It's not "what do you do", it's "how do you do"!
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bellerobot [2015-12-28 20:10:19 +0000 UTC]
OMIGOD that batpony is SOOO CUTE!
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The-Irken-Luxray [2015-11-28 03:34:44 +0000 UTC]
Name idea: Violet Night
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CharliDrawz [2015-11-19 00:37:37 +0000 UTC]
OOOOOHHHH tooshay...
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Wildheartpo [2015-10-25 22:52:40 +0000 UTC]
That is funny! Also, I would suggest Dusk as a name. It's a lovely oc.
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Coolstriker64 [2015-10-10 15:23:09 +0000 UTC]
(attempts to stifle laughter)
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urzapw2000 [2015-09-05 06:21:49 +0000 UTC]
one of those days...
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samykhadre In reply to Oridons [2015-11-04 15:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Except Applebloom ! :3
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