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*rofling at realization of, on first arriving in NY, Liam had clam chowder and I had a chicken panini*I got a huuuuuuge sketchbook in Oneonta the other day, and needed to test it out. <3
Now, I'm not playing favorites with the ATS, I just...have a hard time drawing two characters in one image. So I do those images on photoshop, and, SURPRISE(!) my tablet hates Liam's computer and CS4.
:c
Regardless, here be my pic for the trade with
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If there is one thing that I hate about Sonic, it would be that his fans take up a little too much space. This isn't just the case of DeviantArt, this is also the case of YouTube, ShezzyArt, Furifanty, Myspace, and other sites as well. Although you put some actual effort in this (while the other Sonic-style gimps have not) there are some very jarring flaws with your picture.
First and foremost is the way the hands are formed. The picture has the girl facing the front to where her right is our left. The problem? She has two left hands! How could you not notice this when drawing?
Another flaw is that the stars are a bit wobbly and disorganized. Drawing a pentagram first would have fixed this.
Finally, the lighting and coloring appear dim on her body and on her hair. It also seems unnecessary to add any shade effects to the large gray star.
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Thank you for the critique, it's appreciated to see what someone else thinks for a change.
As for the 'two left hands' thing: I know what you mean. I often do a double-take when I look at it because...well, you're right, it does look like the left hand though I drew it as the right one. Still, it annoys me.
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I happen to be a fan of Nega Velocity. And you made her come out nice. Her one hand is turned wrong, but that's alright. I like how you colored her spines, and I like the bandana on her too. Nice attire, so many spikes to show off the fiesty personality she has. I enjoy the extra things you put into it too. The outline she has and the stars and everything really. Good job.
~Fiery-Angel-Wings
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Traditional art always has that certain feel to it that I love 
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AWESOME!
I simply love this! You drew her perfectly! <3
She looks super cute in your style!
Thanks so much!
I will have my half up soon. :3
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Amazing pic~I love the pose and everything <33 and the coloring is good aswell~~
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I like the colouring on this and a cute job with the pose c: but one of her hands have problems, looks like she has 2 left hands :c.
I think that background fits her so well o3o
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This looks fabulous, I love your style. <33 Nice job coloring. :>
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This one caught my eye big time
I like the pose you used and the calming colors
along with the relaxed expression
you did a really nice job shading!
but i think it needs a little more depth with the lighter areas
if you take an eraser and lightly erase some of the lighter parts it may give it more depth
other than that this looks great! one of your best
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I KNOOOOOOOW. T_T
I wanted to use a darker blue to do that, but, well..that was my darkest blue. |D
Thank you for the feedback. <3
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Aw hehe
Well it looks stunning
you did a great job
Anytime~
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