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ravingroshie — Dead end
Published: 2013-06-14 10:05:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 348; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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Description I built something here but now I have to leave.
Dead ends cant be denied
They demand you to grieve.

Doom sets in as I stare ahead.
My eyes already dead,
Palpitations in my chest.

I'm one who likes to torture myself until the very end.
Ignore all the signs,
It could work, just pretend.

But that makes the collision the more cataclysmic.
That makes the breakdown all the more tragic.
That makes the suicide all the more certain.
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Comments: 14

NearlyInvisibleMind [2013-07-22 06:47:51 +0000 UTC]

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ravingroshie In reply to NearlyInvisibleMind [2013-07-24 03:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou : ) : )

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NearlyInvisibleMind In reply to ravingroshie [2013-07-24 04:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely!...My pleasure

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-07-10 22:09:13 +0000 UTC]

Nice choice of words.

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ravingroshie In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-07-12 00:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you : )

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to ravingroshie [2013-07-12 12:23:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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TonightMyHeartAwakes [2013-06-15 05:59:24 +0000 UTC]

This is quite lonely. 'Doom sets in as I stare ahead' just hit me. Well done

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ravingroshie In reply to TonightMyHeartAwakes [2013-06-15 07:37:11 +0000 UTC]

thankyou, and thanks for the fave(:

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msimoneaux20 [2013-06-15 00:08:46 +0000 UTC]

Very tragic indeed. Great poem, very emotional.

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ravingroshie In reply to msimoneaux20 [2013-06-15 01:32:10 +0000 UTC]

thankyou(:

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TwistedChick2 [2013-06-14 15:14:50 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing roshie! <3

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ravingroshie In reply to TwistedChick2 [2013-06-14 21:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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RuminatingGhost [2013-06-14 11:28:53 +0000 UTC]

A very touching poem that leaves my mind twisting on your words. Very good. Very sad.

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ravingroshie In reply to RuminatingGhost [2013-06-14 21:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much

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