Comments: 23
Ravenfire In reply to KarrinGray [2008-01-28 23:59:38 +0000 UTC]
^_^ Thanks... you should see the final version, WAY better than the rough, early, stuff here. I'm always glad, though, when someone finds something worthwhile in this tale I'm spinning.
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gibbz [2004-02-04 03:23:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure exactly what it is, but there's something about this story that tugs at my heart-strings. Well done, well done.
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Ravenfire In reply to gibbz [2004-02-04 22:28:30 +0000 UTC]
*smile* Thank you! Hopefully you like it enough to stick with me, because this project grows daily. Just wait till you see it in published form with Niku's art...
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gibbz In reply to Ravenfire [2004-02-05 01:58:59 +0000 UTC]
You're publishing it?!?! How can I get my hands on it. ^_^
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Ravenfire In reply to gibbz [2004-02-05 07:58:31 +0000 UTC]
*smile* I'll keep everyone updated. I promise.
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vanile [2004-01-04 16:23:37 +0000 UTC]
its so fantastic so beutiful if i could only know how you came up with it its soo ownderful i think you might have played persona though or mabey not the rumor system in all oh never mind well im going to read the next chapter
youre amazing
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Ravenfire In reply to vanile [2004-01-07 05:13:05 +0000 UTC]
*soft smile* This tale was born on Niku's forum for her fantastic comic 'Fray.' What began so simply became so very much more.... and now it consumes me. It is my driving passion... and the only music which dances within my mind. These characters give me no rest, nor will they permitt me to stop....
The story must be told... and so I tell it.
Thank you.
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Ravenfire In reply to RougeWind [2003-12-02 23:45:34 +0000 UTC]
*eats yummy cookie and smiles warmly* Thanks! On both accounts, really. I work hard on the descriptions, so thank you very much.
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deadlywhispers [2003-11-30 01:31:34 +0000 UTC]
great work! i just cant wait too read the next discriptive chapter. whatever got this idea about this book in your head?
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JanaStormraven [2003-11-30 01:20:38 +0000 UTC]
inntereeestttinnngg.
It is, as others have said before me, beautifully written, if not heavily laden with enchanting words of quality. sometimes too hard to struggle through as readable prose, but good enough, good enough Miss RavenFire. (Mrs Ravenfire?)
will be curious as to the rest of the story, although *probably* could have some ideas here and there. Hey, come on, I've read way too much fantasy and horror for my own good, nothing's truly original these days, lol. Believe me, none of my comments are intented to harm or wound you. more simply, to point out that yes this is beautiful prose, but yes, I'm sure if we all looked we could change things to suit differentiating points of view and ideas.
I'm not one to just go "Kewl" and leave my review at that, then you're left with nothing (apart from the obvious feelings of "woohoo, someone else likes my stuff" which, I will have to admit is great, but often useless) so, if you want to know what I thought without me rambling all that much, drop me a line or something. Or just you know, write more and wait for my next strangely long and pointless review!
Toodles
~Hj
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Ravenfire In reply to JanaStormraven [2003-12-02 23:57:24 +0000 UTC]
No, no, I LOVE your reviews, I really do. At this point in my writting process, I need all the brutal and honest reviews I can get! :smile:
Now, if you have any plot of character development ideas, I would be ever so happy to hear them. I always love to hear what others have to say and think. As you can tell, I am very much influanced by the classical writting style, and that's why I have such a... poetic writting style. but then, I'm a poet by nature. I'd love to hear anything which you might have to add!
Do not ever fear to hurt my feelings, cause you shall not. I can take constructive crtisism, and long for it indeed. I want to grow as a writter, and the only way to do that is to see what can be improved and move toward that. I am very much aware that all writting is a journey. I am yet upon mine. *smile*
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Ravenfire In reply to satek [2003-11-29 19:13:11 +0000 UTC]
*smile* Thanks babe! I know that things are a little confusing still, but you're right in assuming that I do that on purpose. What exactly confuses you? If it's not something I intended, then I have a plot flaw that I need to fix. :wink:
I'm glad you still like the story, things are going to get a lot more interesting from here on out, as I'm sure you can see!
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Ravenfire In reply to ashkeryne [2003-11-29 19:16:04 +0000 UTC]
*hug* Awww Thanks! You're always so sweet. All your possitive feedback really keeps me giong.
I talked to Chris, my producer as Silent Devil the other day. he said that we won't be able to get to print for about a year, but that works fine for me. Niku and I still have a lot of work to do, so we need the time aqnyway.
If you'd like... we'd love you to write some fan fiction about SoA. We still need content for the SoA site, and I love your stuff. Then you really CAN be inside the story! :laugh:
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samus-merid [2003-11-29 09:29:28 +0000 UTC]
My friend, I am going to read them all, your gratitude for my piece was a blessing. This is... I can't even discribe it, but I love it, keep writing, this is good.
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