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like a cold summerbreeze, right? I made this one some months ago. Dont know what to think of it. I like the light and expression, but the jewelry and green top is unfortunate, right? what else is wrong?
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this looks really good small, but you're right about the unfortunate jewelry. It's a little bit awful.
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I love over exposed photographs, especially when they are done so well.
Im going to go out and shoot everythin +2 EV tomorrow and see what I get.
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I think it's immaculately done! So beautiful...
The lighting is just precious! Like a perfect winter.
Although the poncho shirt thing doesn't place...she should have worn a corset or a nice lacey to portray the elegance in her face and the whole shot.
Awesome job tho! *fav*
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I don't think there's something wrong with it!
the fact that theres no contrast at all makes it kind of cotton-like,smooth and her hair looks like feathers.
I like it all in all-Can't give you any other critic to this.
awesome shot
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Nice, fabulous light
"98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature"
wow some else that hasent tried pot
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This odd color palette, this strange angle, this hairstyle (good) and this mood in her makes this model portait one of the most beauty things here in DA.
c o n g r a t u l l a t i o n s !!!
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I think your model is superb and I can't find anything wrong with your work.
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I cant see ANYTHING wrong with this. Its beautiful.
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like many others have said, she does look angelic the way the light is shining around her, giving a heavenly aura. 
--mary.
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Pure brill! Love the monochromatic scheme going on..so light...
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i dont think anything is wrong ... the fact that there is a flaw makes it that much better
good lighting and the hair is neat
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great photo, though i agree with you on the jewelery and the thingy she is wearing underneath.
you asked what else... when you look at her sweater in full view, in her left side there is this hairy piece... dont really like that, bit disturbing.
for the rest of it, i love it
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super-hyper-fantastic. lights, the feeling of coldness and of course the model. stunnin
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there is nothing wrong
perfect light and a great model
i tried to turn it in b/w...i think it looks even better
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the light, the colors and the expression are great,...
buit yeah.... I suppose the jumper isn't completely befitting...or is it the bra strap?
lovely work anway
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This is incredible! The shimmering of the hair, the paleness of it all, the light colored eyes, the simple makeup - everything is gorgeous! The lighting is just incredible!
Mind if I ask how you actually got the lighting on this one?
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hi and thanks for your kind comment 
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wow that looks wonderful. At first I was, so to say, blinded by the light, but then I read your comment with the green top and the earings, and now I agree with you, they shouldn't be there
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Pretty cool photo! the reflex on her hair is amazing! I can bear the top but the necklace, don't know why, but I would prefer without it (usually I like'em... )
You say this was spontaneous?! What were you doing for her to look at you like that?! 
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Wow absolutely wonderful! The lighting makes it look as though shes descending from heaven. Wonderful effect with her hair. I love it.
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Superb delightful ..wonderful lighting and expression .
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nice soft and bright photo....
but I think her 'look' is a bit arrogant....my probably my opinion is wrong
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looks VERY cool. kinda fashion mag like
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she's an ethereal angel . . .
the smoky eye makeup, fly away hair
& tipped expression are really wonderful.
my only agreed complaint
is the silvery line of jewelry
peeking out from the sweater
the green (which i don't realy see) is fine
just that horizontal line in the left field
just above her shoulder seems a distraction:
it puts a bar, a, linear, masculine, finite shape
in a very dreamy, gauzy photo.
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Neat exposure ... dig the overexposure and her expression ... neat work
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Your portrait work keeps amazing me more and more. This is such and amazing image. Fantastic backlighting behind her hair, beautiful tone in the whole photo...almost heavenly. I can see nothing wrong with this.
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Like the neutral colours & backlighting , her hair color just flows right into it . Awesome eyes too , but ya got a weird angle going on here , or maybe there's a little bit too much negative space on the left that accentuates the angle , maybe try a tighter crop ? Eliminate that board on the wall , and the bra strap too if ya can , distracting . Still a striking & emotional shot , I need to play more with harsh light like this , can't hurt me , right .
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I like hte way the jewelry shines and glimmers. If by green top you mean the thing she has under the shirt then yes - that is quite unfortunate. Would look much better if it was just that lace top. composition and focus are correct - but the lighting is just fantastic. As is the hair (like i said in acomment like 3 minutes ago)
I really dont notice that much wrong with it - really just the green top. Id say unsharpen her necklace a tad cuz it doesnt fit in with the smoothness of everything else - but otherwise its spectacular. I really this shot.
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Um wow. Love the hair and head tilt. You always find some great locations.
The green top isn't too noticeable, and the necklace isn't bad. But yeah, don't like the earring. I've made a note to myself to not allow jewelry unless it is key to the shot.
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i LOVE this.. you once again impress with your capture Lars.
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well, i think that nothing is wrong. for me this photo is divine and perfect xD
i just love gentle and bright colours of it - and the model, she looks just like an angle - great hair and expression of her face, so inaccessity!
your works never cease to amaze me
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Really love the colors in that pic. It's a great piece of work, it really is 
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Really beautiful shot. Love the way her hair is! So lovely!
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Woa it's very beautiful and "fresh"
Her hair looks like flying
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