Comments: 38
SakuraKitt [2010-08-04 22:03:15 +0000 UTC]
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I saw your journal about how you're trying to improve, so I thought I'd write you a critique to help C:
Firstly, I love this picture ^^ The character looks so crisp and detailed, with great colours...and I love the feel of the background, with all the watery mist and whatnot <333
But let me just nitpick at two little things~
Character shading: It's great to include all that little detail of highlights in the fur, but it gets confusing when you do it EVERYWHERE...just in a couple/few carefully selected places is enough. When it's evenly spread we start to wonder where on earth is the light source that could possibly create that effect?
I notice the Sun is behind the character, and because it's quite a bit above the charries back, the back would get quite a lot of the sunlight C: The muzzle and under the eye, however, would not. I'm not sure why you've shaded it like that when everything els is darker coloured, it's pretty much impossible for the lighting to do that.
The background - The thing is, your character is so crisp and clean, but the background is just all blurry, it needs some areas which are precious and detailed, just like you've done with the character :3 I recommend making the forground (the land, grass, and water down the bottom) clean and detailed so the focus is on the forground. It would add so much to the image.
These are just little things, but I think they could help you a lot! ^^ Not just for this drawing, but they are ideas which will apply to most of your work! 8D Anyway, great effort, I love the colours and your style, keep it up.
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Quiell [2010-08-18 06:05:31 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful.
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Rashirou In reply to Quiell [2010-08-18 10:50:18 +0000 UTC]
thank you!!
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Shayleena [2010-08-10 10:37:34 +0000 UTC]
Wu, the background is nice, like the colors
and the way youve shadet everything in this pic
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Rashirou In reply to Shayleena [2010-08-10 10:58:03 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot!!
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terrasour [2010-08-06 17:12:20 +0000 UTC]
5Thank you so much! I love it. More of my artwork is coming soon. Im just finishing them.
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Healed--Wolf [2010-08-01 07:56:42 +0000 UTC]
nice artwork
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SakuraKitt [2010-08-01 03:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this looks great :3 I love how you did the water C8
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Moxillia [2010-07-30 02:58:14 +0000 UTC]
This is so awesome! <#33
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Rashirou In reply to Moxillia [2010-07-30 09:26:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot! XD
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Moxillia In reply to Rashirou [2010-08-02 00:30:06 +0000 UTC]
No problem! <333 C:
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KingNaoki [2010-07-29 21:46:42 +0000 UTC]
AHH I LIKE THE FOGGY BACKGROUND .
Fogs remind me of ghosts : DD
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Rashirou In reply to KingNaoki [2010-07-29 21:48:31 +0000 UTC]
lol.xD thanks!
haha xD
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KingNaoki In reply to Rashirou [2010-07-29 21:50:11 +0000 UTC]
YOU SHOULD DRAW A TRANSPARENT GHOST WOLFIE : DD
It'd be all DAAAMN I'M A GHOST .
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Rashirou In reply to KingNaoki [2010-07-29 21:51:04 +0000 UTC]
omg yess, I should do one someday
or a fox. 8D
would be cool. 8DD
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KingNaoki In reply to Rashirou [2010-07-29 21:55:01 +0000 UTC]
YESS .
AND IT SHOULD WEAR AN ELABORATE HAT .
Like .. The mad hatter hat C:
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KingNaoki In reply to Rashirou [2010-07-29 22:00:50 +0000 UTC]
YEAH .
But you don't have too .. I just like animals in hats : DD
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KingNaoki In reply to Rashirou [2010-07-29 22:02:42 +0000 UTC]
They look cooler that way : DD
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i-Moosker [2010-07-29 21:31:12 +0000 UTC]
The front left paw looks broken... But otherwise I love it!
How in the world did you do the rainbow-like light spots on the fur? That's sick!!
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Rashirou In reply to i-Moosker [2010-07-29 21:40:49 +0000 UTC]
hah I guess.xD
But thanks!! xD
hahah lolol
those are just the simple higlights from the sun haha.xD
those are pretty easy to do when going together with the shading style lol.
I mostly use orange or orange like yellows, aribrush and make the higlights everywhere lol.xD
as for the fur, I darw light and fur like lines on the none-shaded parts of the fur.xD
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i-Moosker In reply to Rashirou [2010-07-30 01:05:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay I see!!
Interesting~~
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Rashirou In reply to Kairi292 [2010-07-29 20:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Omg!8DD
Thank you so much!!!
And I'm really glad you like it!!
xD
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Brakien [2010-07-29 19:57:03 +0000 UTC]
Nice detail!!!
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Rashirou In reply to Brakien [2010-07-29 20:00:02 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
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WildixHP [2010-07-29 19:26:15 +0000 UTC]
I ... LOVE IT :'D
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Rashirou In reply to WildixHP [2010-07-29 19:36:41 +0000 UTC]
thank you!! XD
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