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rareazn β€” A Wish and a Stumble

Published: 2009-01-01 00:34:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 953; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 17
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Description trying reverse splattering...didn't come out as well as i had hoped
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xxCrimsonStars [2009-10-26 17:17:19 +0000 UTC]

featured!

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mouseegirl [2009-07-26 16:34:29 +0000 UTC]

your traditional work is amazing and your shading is out of this world too great job

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chocolatemilklove [2009-07-20 21:03:52 +0000 UTC]

this is really cool!
i thought she was a fairy at first by looking at the thumb, haha. i dont know what i was thinking xD
this is really cool though!

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rareazn In reply to chocolatemilklove [2009-07-21 04:51:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Brutus-Illustrator [2009-07-20 20:31:43 +0000 UTC]

I think this piece is great. The perspective and imagination are what make it for me. Great work.

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vicefoo2 [2009-07-16 20:52:07 +0000 UTC]

I think it came out really nicely. This looks so good, I really like this one. Your style is awesome.

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rareazn In reply to vicefoo2 [2009-07-17 04:01:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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TeapotMysteries [2009-07-09 03:19:25 +0000 UTC]

you have been featured here [link]

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aerisek [2009-06-07 13:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice idea but you did something weird with the anatomy- hands looks kinda not-right.

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rareazn In reply to aerisek [2009-06-07 19:03:58 +0000 UTC]

yea, it was an experiment though..

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smaurice [2009-06-06 18:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Congrats - this piece has been featured! You may view it here: [link]

and here: [link]

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rareazn In reply to smaurice [2009-06-06 23:42:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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smaurice In reply to rareazn [2009-06-07 00:37:51 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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MeganLeeRetouching [2009-06-06 02:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, great detail. I really like this. It's really pretty, great work.

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rareazn In reply to MeganLeeRetouching [2009-06-06 02:34:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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MeganLeeRetouching In reply to rareazn [2009-06-06 02:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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ElaryWakefield [2009-05-29 15:13:20 +0000 UTC]

very nice. I like the post

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rareazn In reply to ElaryWakefield [2009-05-30 02:25:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Viscious-Speed [2009-05-25 12:32:20 +0000 UTC]

U may not be too happy with the outcome but still, there's something quite beautiful here, I don't quite know what it is but it's really an interesting visual & one which is very emotive too. I like that u've combined an illustrative style with abstract bg, the result is quite surprising. Good job on this & keep working on it!

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rareazn In reply to Viscious-Speed [2009-05-25 21:11:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Chewnbaby [2009-05-23 17:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Hi

This is a comment on behalf of the ~Critique-Me club.

You commented that the reverse spattering didn’t work that well. I think you’re right in this case, but I do think there’s potential there. I guess the main problem is that the size of the splatters doesn’t vary, which detracts from the effect of the rope disappearing into the dark distance. It would be great if you could use it to add to the directional feeling already achieved with the brush strokes in the ink, which aid the impression of perspective. Also, I feel that the busy-ness of the background and having the grey at the top means that the girl has become a little β€˜lost’ and that there’s not a clear focus to this image.

Thinking about the main character, I like the dress and her hair especially, as well as the rope she’s hanging on to. I’m intrigued by the serenity of her expression, as I don’t think I would look like that if I were in her situation! I do think that you would be able to see something of her other leg, even if it’s just the foot coming around from the far side of the rope.

Overall, I think it’s a pretty and original image, but that it’s too busy so it loses impact. It might be interesting to have another go at this.

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Bunnylicious [2009-05-08 21:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm from Critique-Me.

Let me start by saying that I reaaaaally love the perspective in this drawing and the background just makes everything look so wonderfully chaotic.

I like how you shaded the hair, but I think it would have looked better if it wasn't so clumped together but more loose and wind blown. Also, the hand looks more like a claw and not very natural, especially with the way she's holding onto the rope. I'm pretty sure the fingers should be spread out more and 'hooked'.

Overall though, this is a nicely original drawing. :3 Good job!

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rareazn In reply to Bunnylicious [2009-05-09 05:15:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you yea I have gotten comments about the hair, but I never realized that about the hand. Thanks again for that lovely critique

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Tsaalyo [2009-04-19 15:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Your art has been featured! [link]

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rareazn In reply to Tsaalyo [2009-04-19 15:54:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Haen9 [2009-04-18 12:49:06 +0000 UTC]

You are featured in my journal

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NorthernAnimator [2009-04-13 21:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Very good ^_^

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chunkCHEESE [2009-04-05 05:49:03 +0000 UTC]

that is incredible

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rareazn In reply to chunkCHEESE [2009-04-05 06:16:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Zerj19 [2009-03-31 03:53:18 +0000 UTC]

well I think it looks pretty cool!

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rareazn In reply to Zerj19 [2009-03-31 23:31:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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LittleShopOfCutes [2009-03-24 09:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Hi this has been featured in my journal >>[link]

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rareazn In reply to LittleShopOfCutes [2009-03-25 03:43:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Hurricane-Jeanne [2009-03-21 02:49:37 +0000 UTC]

I love the angle of this! It's hard to get such angles! I also love the splattering!

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rareazn In reply to Hurricane-Jeanne [2009-03-21 16:06:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Hurricane-Jeanne In reply to rareazn [2009-03-21 16:29:08 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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inthename [2009-01-20 06:44:02 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! I adore the illusion that you have portrayed and also the details!

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rareazn In reply to inthename [2009-01-21 01:46:26 +0000 UTC]

yay thank you for the compliment and favorite

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inthename In reply to rareazn [2009-01-21 16:23:43 +0000 UTC]

It's a pleasure!

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llifi-kei [2009-01-20 06:25:08 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty! ^^ The perspective of the rope, the girl's flying hair and all those splatters give it a nice sense of movement. A very neat concept for a piece; I like it!

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rareazn In reply to llifi-kei [2009-01-21 01:47:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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Felt-heart [2009-01-20 05:54:13 +0000 UTC]

I do really like this! Is very cool^_^

Something you could do though is give it a bit more shading.

Also if you wanted, you could make her hair more loose. Though I must say I like it like that, it something different and it looks cool. but to try something new you could do that

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rareazn In reply to Felt-heart [2009-01-20 06:18:12 +0000 UTC]

yea, i should work on the shading,

thanks for pointing out the hair now i realize that it does look alittle fixed and unreal
thanks again

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Felt-heart In reply to rareazn [2009-01-20 22:06:02 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Decibell [2009-01-02 01:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Woah INTENSE! Looks like she's getting sucked into a black hole or something of the sort, awesome! It has a great sense of movement

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rareazn In reply to Decibell [2009-01-02 21:01:54 +0000 UTC]

yay, it's what i was going for thanx

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sombreroh [2009-01-01 09:49:03 +0000 UTC]

WOW, WOW, WOW, whut!? Crazy perspective and love the splatterings! Cool how she is like lowing into the darkness! for sure!

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rareazn In reply to sombreroh [2009-01-01 20:28:02 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanx you don't think the spatters are alittle too much?

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sombreroh In reply to rareazn [2009-01-01 20:31:57 +0000 UTC]

No, they're cool!

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