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Ramourzi — LoMH: Their Banishment of Eden

Published: 2011-12-02 23:23:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2971; Favourites: 146; Downloads: 34
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Description Land of Milk and Honey: Prayer 6- Their Banishment of Eden


"Ka..." he whispered, bringing his hand around my neck to pull me down. “What do you say we stop running now? I'm tired and you know I can't go very far with these legs of mine."

Shaking my head I felt completely hopeless. Here I finally had the chance to be with the person I loved the most and I couldn’t do anything to save his life.

“We have to go Sarchán. The whole city is on fire.”

“Then let it burn Kamén…it’s what we wanted after all.”

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Nooooooo there I go killing of my characters again! hahaha. These are the main characters of my story 'In The Land of Milk and Honey". What is it? well to put short it's full of Genocide, clashing religions, romance, and sadness. haha.

Sarchán and Kamén © Shinshi-san
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Comments: 19

iStealUrCandy [2013-10-30 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]

;//////////; why is everything too sexy for my eyes??

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jiminy-dollars [2012-10-10 06:35:49 +0000 UTC]

This is a really beautiful piece of art. Everything about it is just gorgeous.

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Ramourzi In reply to jiminy-dollars [2012-10-10 18:52:29 +0000 UTC]

;/////; Thank you.

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NEJO-A [2012-06-25 10:04:35 +0000 UTC]

this is so amazing , cute and every thing ooooh
love it

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Ramourzi In reply to NEJO-A [2012-06-25 19:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh Thank youuu! C:

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ALewiso [2012-01-27 00:20:43 +0000 UTC]

que mirada.,,,auuu amorr.... buen trabajo!

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Ramourzi In reply to ALewiso [2012-01-27 00:26:56 +0000 UTC]

jaja gracias!

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NotRealNice [2011-12-12 06:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Love it!!! Where can I read "In the land of Milk and Honey"? This is like amazingness and its peaked my interest soooo much!!!!

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Ramourzi In reply to NotRealNice [2011-12-12 06:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh thankies so very much. haha It's an original story of mine, I've never posted it though. I'm still doing some last moment edits C:

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NotRealNice In reply to Ramourzi [2011-12-15 03:25:55 +0000 UTC]

let me know if you need any help with those edits! (only half joking) I love sneak peeks and if I can help the writer then that's all the better!

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Zeroragnarok [2011-12-09 00:16:37 +0000 UTC]

buen trabajo

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Ramourzi In reply to Zeroragnarok [2011-12-09 01:12:39 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias! C:

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raiden-corvaine [2011-12-06 00:29:55 +0000 UTC]

This is just...beyond too adorable Gor-jahs

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Zexy-n-me [2011-12-05 03:43:53 +0000 UTC]

This is really great! I would love to read this story, it seems really good from that preview. My only recommendation for this is to work on the fire in the background. It looks more like a glow than fire, and I didn't know that it WAS fire until I read the description. Other than that, I am amazed by how well the people were drawn, it really looks great. And the expression on the guy on the right is perfect. Great work, keep it up!

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AnguianoArt [2011-12-03 04:41:06 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE this so much, I really wish you would let me read your stories!

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Ramourzi In reply to AnguianoArt [2011-12-03 17:50:07 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you! I'll send this one over once I'm done editing it!!

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AnguianoArt In reply to Ramourzi [2011-12-09 04:55:32 +0000 UTC]

THANKS!!

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Raithetiger [2011-12-03 00:28:18 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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Ramourzi In reply to Raithetiger [2011-12-03 02:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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