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Published: 2012-09-21 02:12:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 566; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Lots of empty space on this one because I plan on using it in an artist confession. No I won't go and bash other artists, that's just stupid.Cleo again. Her outfit is based of a Vanillite (in other words a Pokemon). After a while though I got tired of all the blue.
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I really love your coloring my only critique is that her profile is a little squished in, make sure when you are unsure about how something looks that you use reference, here's the lovely Audrey Hepburn for some reference of the profile. [link] , also you got a bit of the Egyptian hieroglyphic style eye going on the eye seems to be straight on in the style of size and shape instead of in profile, it's not bad in this piece just something to be mindful of.
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I'm heavily pleased by the Audrey Hepburn in my messages 
Anyways thank you very much for the crit! You weren't the only one who thought that the profile was off, thanks to you and a few others, I've got some great feedback! I'll keep that photo as a reference, thank you so much 
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Also another thing I seems to forgot to mention, note the jawline too, it doesn't really slope down like you have drawn it, instead it should slope up. As long as you use reference and stuff you should be fine.
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Oh yeah someone noted me about that and I've been practicing that facial feature so it looks right but feels right with my work (but they are mainly doodles ahhhh)
Thank you once again!
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Your coloring, especially the hair, is absolutely stunning! I think my only critique would be about the nose, it doesn't exactly connect that way. Overall, a very beautiful piece.
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Yeah you're not the only one who thinks the nose is off;;;;
Thank you very much though! I'll certainly keep noses in mind for the future!
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How gorgeous! Interesting that you based her outfit off of a Vanillite but I gotta say it works! Her dress looks marvellous and those little crystals add so much to the design. You've gotten really good lately, you know that? Your shading is so gorgeous. Her expression here is really nice too!
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Awwww thank you! I was trying harder with my shading because my teacher said I lacked depth. Said teacher was right~
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No problem! I see... your teacher was right. They seem very smart!
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He is sometimes, just very spacey~
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Awweeee I really like the coloured lighting~ the diamond + clothes are cute too! And I adore her expression >v<
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I love the diamonds, they look great. *o* And I adore the lineart~~
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I love the coloring, but her nose seems a little small.
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Ahhh I see now, I can fix that, thanks : D !
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