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Published: 2009-09-27 01:32:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 7557; Favourites: 141; Downloads: 143
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A guy faces a mysterious black magic using opponent who is trying to stop him at all costs...
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aww...
its just me trying to choreograph a fight scene and do something involving Black Magic. So just did a story around these
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Haha, awesome storyline. It was really well made.
However, when the VooDoo guy takes the pizza, I think he needs to say "im not paying for this" more clearly. Its kinda hard to hear.
Also, it'd be good if you pointed to the fact that the guys delivering a pizza in the first scene. I only realized it towards the end.
Other than that, it was a great film. Awesome Work!
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thank you for the review 
yeah. the sound was a bit off there...
and I wanted to maintain it a suspense till the end that he is a pizza delivery guy which is why I did not reveal it in the beginning
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your welcome. I really enjoyed watching it.
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hi!
I tried something different:
[link]
can you give me a critique please?
your critique on Voodoo was very helpful
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lmao. Absolutely genius ending. (: damn. makes me want to know the pizza man and know how to do voodoo.
Kudos.
This deserves a booze. Cheers.
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great film
well writen script and good job editing to make it all work
i loved the twist at the end
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Haha, as soon as I saw the pizza, I couldn't stop laughing. Awesome idea!
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Very very good!
Hmm. my thoughts on this:
in the first car scene I hear a bit of wind noise. It's a bit minor but it is noticeable.
Story wise I really enjoyed the story. Had a nice build up and very good payoff, but what really drives me nuts (in a good way) is the scene in which people start appearing to fight the character.
Though the final scene in which main character gives pizza to the voodoo guy makes me wonder why would this voodoo guy want a pizza. We are not introduced to the notion that the guy being attacked is a pizza delivery guy. In my humbest opinion a bit more information of the main character's job may clear up why the voodoo guy wants a free pizza.
Other than that shot variety was excellent, dialogue was hilarious, story was magnificent, and you have earned a FAV from me.
DT
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hi!
I tried something different:
[link]
can you give me a critique please?
your critique on Voodoo was very helpful
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Thanks a lot for the review and the 
Actually, the sound in the beginning was the hum of the car engine-noise. kind of sounds strange I know 
Thanks about the story
and the idea about the story was how a VooDoo expert would use his stuff in today's world. So I went for a silly end
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Very funny. I understand the concept. Free pizza after thirty minutes! XDDDD
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This is the only awkward part of the fight scene but then again, not many people wan't to risk getting hit in the gut by accident. ^_^ I love the one handed take down directly after this though. It reminded me of a great many action oriented comics and cartoons which I love to death. Great job, Loved the ending.
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hi!
I tried something different:
[link]
can you give me a critique please?
your critique on Voodoo was very helpful
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hehe. yeah. I was paranoid about people getting hurt...
Thank you
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ya,the fight scene was a bit cheesy (like everyones already said) but whenever the guy kicked, he seemed to stagger a bit after it.......if he could beat 4 people in a crowd of about 15, all attacking at the same time, i just think he could have better balance than that >_>
great movie though, loved the ending.
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haha! yeah. We were all students who got out of the library to shoot one fine day
Thank you
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so what gave you the inspiration for that? lol. its kinda obvious. nevermind. lol.
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hmm...
wanted to choreograph a fight scene, and to do something with black magic. was searching for a reason to do those
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lol. you have a great imagination! i wouldve never guessed he was a pizza delivery guy!
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Ahahahahaha! nice! If only that worked...hm.... *strokes evil cat thoughtfully...**
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haha! you have an evil cat???!!!
Thank you
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yeshhh! but hes imaginary! shh...dont break teh secwet!
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Don't worry, every aspiring villain has an evil cat. Half of which is imaginary. The other half is usually and extremely pushy yet non-evil feline that they spend time taking care of when they're not stroking it.
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hahahaha nice way to explain it!
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