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Published: 2013-09-03 01:30:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2620; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 0
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EDIT: After reading some critiques, I decided to touch up the picture a bit, fix that really bothersome shading I think it looks better now :3
I am so happy with how this turned out ;w; I like the messy look it has
Beyond happy that it's not full body xD Needed a break from all that anatomy o-o
This is gonna be my new ID ^^ Going to redo my page~~
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Photoshop CS6 | 1.5 Hours
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Comments: 83

rae-lightstar In reply to ??? [2013-10-04 13:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you very much for your critique! I will keep those points in mind, I appreciate it :3

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StormWolves12 In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-10-04 19:03:28 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome. the pic deserved it ^-^

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Subii [2013-09-19 00:31:31 +0000 UTC]

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Light! This is amazing! I love hoe you did the shading and it looks fantastic! The eyes are so, so, vibrant ans somewhat realistic but cartoony at the same time! I think this is totally gorgeous! But the curl could use a little work and also the tip curl of the curl (sounded weird) could also use some work. =/ but over all, amazing! I think you should be in a digital art museum! And I bet if you keep practicing and work even harder, I am sure you would get your art displayed! And also, you should try some traditional art! I am sure a lot of us would love to see how you draw without a tablet!

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rae-lightstar In reply to Subii [2013-09-19 13:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you very much for your critique!

Yes you're right about the curl, I'm gonna fix that c:

I will most certainly post some traditional art, anything specific you have in mind?

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Subii In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-20 01:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! And maybe the whole crew you have? like Light, Griffin, and the rest

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rae-lightstar In reply to Subii [2013-09-21 16:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Haha ok xD

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Subii In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-22 00:17:03 +0000 UTC]

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celebrating-nothing [2013-09-03 12:58:54 +0000 UTC]

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Excellent piece! The colors were chosen well an go exceptionally well together. I like that bit of glow to your artwork, and this piece is no different. The Romano curl is cute ^.^ but doesn't 100% go with the hair, it should be a little more opaque like the rest of the outline, or not be there O.o sorry! The rest of the hair is straight and then it's like "random curl" xD but that gives it personality! :3 the eyes are absolutely phenomenal. I love the feathery look you give to the outside of the iris, it's beautiful. The shading on the upper part of the drawing on the fur is also very good! Uh oh, more improvement stuff. The fur towards the torso of the animal is a little sloppy, almost like you rushed it maybe. I know you said you liked the messy look, and it does fit well for this piece, the fur on the torso being a bit neater wouldn't hurt. However, overall the piece is fantastic, and you are improving so much and it shows through all of the beautiful pieces in your gallery. Keep up the good work and don't ever give up at your dream :3

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rae-lightstar In reply to celebrating-nothing [2013-09-03 23:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you so much~! Your critique was very helpful (:

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celebrating-nothing In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-04 00:33:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I'm glad it was helpful and I hope to help make you the beautiful shining artist you are! Your getting there! :3

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rae-lightstar In reply to celebrating-nothing [2013-09-05 11:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Nawwww thank-you so much :3

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celebrating-nothing In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-05 14:00:43 +0000 UTC]

No problemo :3

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LpsCandy556k [2013-09-03 02:43:28 +0000 UTC]

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All I can say is AMAZING!!! The art is set out so perfectly. The texture is gorgeous.
The background looks real and lit up. I bet you worked so hard on this cause it is just so amazing!!!! Your art should be in a museum one day Light! Your art work is truly that good! Her eyes.... the way they stare is so beautiful. The color of the purple is so cool!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! The curl in her hair is just breath- taking. I think you did great in trying to make your cat, " Light" seem real. The colors just make it seem like it is real, and it pops out and hurts your eyes. lol But I love that about it!!!!!!
GREAT JOB LIGHT!!!!
You did good.
You truly did.
- Keira e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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rae-lightstar In reply to LpsCandy556k [2013-09-03 11:18:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you so much~! ^u^

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LpsCandy556k In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-04 00:06:13 +0000 UTC]

np

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disasteroIogy [2013-09-03 01:52:26 +0000 UTC]

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I love The eyes and the way you did the fur, though I would recommend making the head just a bit bigger. The fur is very well detailed, and the shading is almost perfect. On to the background. I think the background is just beautiful, and the colors go perfect. Very well done, and I'm looking forward to seeing improvement in the years to come. Amazing job.
I NEED MORE WORDS! I NEED MORE WORDS! I NEED MORE WORDS! I NEED MORE WORDS! I NEED MORE WORDS! I NEED MORE WORDS! I NEED MORE WORDS! I NEED MORE WORDS!
yay

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rae-lightstar In reply to disasteroIogy [2013-09-03 11:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you so much for your critique ^u^

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disasteroIogy In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-03 20:35:27 +0000 UTC]

No problem. :3

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Alone-Dragon [2013-09-03 01:39:49 +0000 UTC]

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OMG Light.
This is just beyond beautiful<3
I mean, I just have always loved your way of shading, But this messy look is awesome~! You should definitely do more pieces of art like this. If you had done full body it probably wouldn't have looked as nice, the way you did this is amazing, I've been your friend pretty much since you joined DA, and I've watched your art style grow and change, and looking back at your old art, you've come a far way my friend~ Your style has changed so much, and it's still changing, and it gets better by the minute<3 Keep doing what you do, it's amazing<333

~Dragon

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rae-lightstar In reply to Alone-Dragon [2013-09-03 11:37:02 +0000 UTC]

ffffffff thanks so much Dragon :3

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Alone-Dragon In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-03 20:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, No problem ;3

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Cinemutt14 [2015-04-18 02:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Ths looks awesomeeee:3

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Jadey-San [2014-10-07 18:56:55 +0000 UTC]

OMG! I DIDN'T KNOW YOU HAD A DA ACCOUTN!I love your LPS series Red ^^ Too bad i don't have a youtube account,I would totally subscribe you!

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LPSlover945 [2014-06-07 15:23:53 +0000 UTC]

when i was little i would draw a cat that looked like Light but she didnt have spots

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rae-lightstar In reply to LPSlover945 [2014-06-13 12:46:06 +0000 UTC]

cool :3

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capricorncat [2014-05-21 00:59:33 +0000 UTC]

i always love ur shading on ur art irt looks lik the pic is glowing

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Lexi-Renn [2014-04-03 09:24:14 +0000 UTC]

lightgoesrawr you are a amazing artist with your deviantart pictures your animation channel and your youtube channel its all so perfect and great! you truly have a gift and talent! keep up the great work! if you can write it read it create it draw it or even animate it its all just a perfect powerful talent you have!

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rae-lightstar In reply to Lexi-Renn [2014-04-08 13:04:03 +0000 UTC]

aghhhhhhhh thank-you so much <3 ;w;

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Lexi-Renn In reply to rae-lightstar [2014-04-08 20:15:52 +0000 UTC]

your welcome! keep up with ur animating and drawing and you will be perfect!! c:

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Huskylovey101 [2014-02-01 04:32:47 +0000 UTC]

I saw this on your youtube icon

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rae-lightstar In reply to Huskylovey101 [2014-02-01 13:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha yep ^u^

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Missponydrawer [2013-12-23 19:37:41 +0000 UTC]

You sound familer to StarlightGoesRawr And Amazing

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rae-lightstar In reply to Missponydrawer [2014-01-06 14:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Ah, well my name was first

and thanks ;w;

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StephaniegoesRAWR [2013-11-13 05:55:41 +0000 UTC]

You must have worked REALLY hard hun...<3 Really cute and a Pro at it!! <3

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fantasyDREAM13 [2013-11-04 12:42:16 +0000 UTC]

IT IS SOOOOGOOD

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rae-lightstar In reply to fantasyDREAM13 [2013-11-12 12:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh ;w; thanks :'3

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Chelseagtv [2013-10-15 23:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Nawwe Cute! ^w^

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rae-lightstar In reply to Chelseagtv [2013-10-16 16:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thanks

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magicalrainbowkitten [2013-10-05 01:27:14 +0000 UTC]

This is so CUTE!!!!

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rae-lightstar In reply to magicalrainbowkitten [2013-10-08 18:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Lpsponyfan252 [2013-09-15 17:10:22 +0000 UTC]

This is just my opinon,I'm not trying to be mean, but maybe its a bit to messy.

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rae-lightstar In reply to Lpsponyfan252 [2013-09-16 11:18:26 +0000 UTC]

That's kinda the point

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xMoonlightSpiritsx [2013-09-09 01:49:46 +0000 UTC]

This is so pretty, Light! :3

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rae-lightstar In reply to xMoonlightSpiritsx [2013-09-11 11:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you very much~! ^^

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HorseQueenDiamond [2013-09-08 21:26:51 +0000 UTC]

exquistite shading! did I spell dat right?? 

 

would critique but im inna rush

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rae-lightstar In reply to HorseQueenDiamond [2013-09-11 11:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you so much (":

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HorseQueenDiamond In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-12 23:12:25 +0000 UTC]

np! =^.^=

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shadowstar0217 [2013-09-07 12:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Amazing wanna be friends ? And also did you open a my little pony channel?

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rae-lightstar In reply to shadowstar0217 [2013-09-11 11:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you~!

Sure and yes I did ;3

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shadowstar0217 In reply to rae-lightstar [2013-09-11 22:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Yay ^^

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