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RasheruSuzie [2017-08-28 17:49:39 +0000 UTC]
Hello, saw this on ProjectComment
I’m not sure exactly what you did in this? I'll assume you did the posing, lighting and rendering, but not entirely sure what to critique since it’s not your own 3d model. Sorry in advance /:
First off, the lighting is a bit too hectic. If it’s a render, I’d suggest using directional lights or spotlights with shadows turned on to get a clearer sense of light direction. All the little orange and red lights distract from what I assume is the main light (the pink light) so I’d reconsider using them at all; if they’re important, their number and intensity could be reduced. I’m not sure if there’s a reason for the main light to be pink, since it’s not a threatening color. Red, yellow or blue could make more sense depending on the environment. Probably red if it’s in a volcano.
The background and most of the character is very dark, so it’s hard to understand what is what. Perhaps a cold glow (blue, maybe) could be added behind the character so he stands out more. Reducing the amount of colors on the body along with a clear light direction would greatly help show off the monster in an understandable manner imo.
It is after all an interesting-looking monster, and the posing is fairly nice albeit simple. The choice of showing him from a low angle is the right one to show the monster is strong and dangerous.
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Qurupeco16 In reply to RasheruSuzie [2017-08-30 20:17:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, all I needed was a critique about lighting, effects and posing, because, after all, that's what SFM users makes.
Light that is pointing to Brachy is actually red/orange, but after rendering it... well, it came like that. .-.
Background I'm still thinking, because sometimes I want to use chroma thing but then I saw some animator who makes amazing backgrounds with lights and... then I'm blocked.
I will try to work on lighting on background, thx for the critique.
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IndigoWizard [2017-08-26 16:12:56 +0000 UTC]
Brachy tailhammer+ is my fav weapon
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Qurupeco16 In reply to IndigoWizard [2017-08-26 19:24:12 +0000 UTC]
For me Brachy great sword xD is just amazing
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IndigoWizard In reply to Qurupeco16 [2017-08-26 22:29:29 +0000 UTC]
It's been long since I actually played the game, but I think I found greatswords a bit too slow, personally. Can't remember it that well though, as it was two years ago.
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Qurupeco16 In reply to IndigoWizard [2017-08-27 10:03:20 +0000 UTC]
Great swords are slow, but in Generations you can use some hunt styles to mix the power of the sword with a skill to avoid attacks, the only problem is that it'll still be slow. xD
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