Shizuko-Akatsuki [2016-12-11 10:49:52 +0000 UTC]
Chara looks adorable on this picture ! I love the way you drew her eyes and the background, I like these glowing effects <3
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Griffonmender [2016-12-04 20:53:08 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't say always, but, yeah, there are a couple crummy ones that go full fanservice at the expense of everything else, up to and including basic spelling and grmmar. ^ ^;
(It doesn't really help that romance is one of the two hardest genres to write- and the other is horror, which is why a lot of horror/grimdark fics end up in the same boat. ^ ^
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An undertale fic I read that was pretty good was "The Best of Times, the Worst of Times"- it takes place after the pacifist eding in the "gaster blaster sans" AU.( abadtime.tumblr.com/The-best-o…)
It's dark, somewhat violent, and occasionally scary, but it also has light-hearted and funny moments, and the characterization is spot on without being too restricted. Overall, it's tone is very balanced and it's very well-written.
But I digress: this piece is really shiny and nice, good job. ^ ^
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Pumiu In reply to Griffonmender [2016-12-04 20:57:44 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes ur right ;v; that's why i usually stop reading, cus it either doesn't make sense anymore or it's a bit too cringy x.x
So thank u for the suggestion~ I'll definitely take a look! ^o^
And i'm glad u like this piece! ♥
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