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Merlumia [2011-10-11 07:55:24 +0000 UTC]
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Perfect music for reading this. ~
Well, the 'Nonary Game' in your gallery caught my interest and it turned out to be as I expected. When the bracelet showed up, I knew for sure where you drew your inspiration from. But it doesn't halt the fact, that it's still interesting to read from a Dewott's view.
The puzzle around the digital root was well done. Maybe it was even better to change it, as it's expansion with despair and hopelessness adds much to the excitement.
I also liked the fact about Rachael that she can't be under water for a whole eternity. Many people have the wrong assumption of Water-types, so good job on adding this.
Keep up the work, you're good at writing. I'm looking forward to the next part. ~
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to Merlumia [2011-10-12 02:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I'm gonna be brutally honest. I've never actually played or even heard of the game '999' until after I started this challenge; When my friend started the challnge for us, I just used his basic plot guideline and just added in whatever came to my imagination. So when I went to check out your link and some previews of the actual game, I had a facepalm moment for not checking it out sooner. It really looks like an amazing game that I want now; and I'm sorry if my version doesn't quite follow any of the plot points from the game and seems a little offtrack. Though thank you for your support and watch and I hope to not dissapoint my new reader in the future.
(And if I do, let me struck by a giant log )
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Merlumia In reply to PuebloDoG62 [2011-10-12 07:05:11 +0000 UTC]
I see.
After browsing some of HumanPikachus journals, I assume he played the game and wanted to do this contest. This is going to be interesting. ~
Don't worry, your version is also very good and doesn't even need to be the same as in the game. Besides, maybe it's better if you don't know the game at all, because you have to use your imagination much more. Thus, it turns out to be something unique.
Regarding the game, yes, it is amazing. Its design is possibly one of the most unique in the last years. If you like text-heavy adventures, you can't let this one pass by.
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to Herodrake [2011-10-09 20:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Your pokemon are in this too if you remember
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Herodrake In reply to PuebloDoG62 [2011-10-09 20:34:52 +0000 UTC]
I know, I know... I'm writing it... like, now...
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to Herodrake [2011-10-09 20:48:31 +0000 UTC]
And then we get to see it come out about a month from now...by the way, hows the mew episode of Sott Talk coming along, hehe
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HumanPikachu In reply to PuebloDoG62 [2011-10-09 20:54:05 +0000 UTC]
It's ok. I did leave you guys a lot of room, and this type of stuff does make it interesting... And yes, I could.
....No, I'm not... Zero is running the show here.
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to HumanPikachu [2011-10-10 00:52:29 +0000 UTC]
I hate you
Damn, then I guess its that homicidal manaic from Anarchy Reigns
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Zelda206 [2011-10-07 21:14:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh, this game was the BOMB! I wanna see more!!!
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pokediginut [2011-10-07 21:11:41 +0000 UTC]
Taichi: *Crying silently to himself in a corner for not being there for her*
OMG Poor Rachael, I'm so scared for her. As usual, you manage to submit first. Now I know how to finish what I started. And yes, is a jerk for doingt this to our Pokemon.
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to pokediginut [2011-10-09 20:39:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry Taichi, but remember, I would never let one of my favorite pokemon die
Rachael: As long as you're there till the end, I know we'll survive Tai
(I'm sorry if that offended ya for submitting first; I had a really boring afternoon and I went to my favorite writing spot> A creek just up the road from my house)
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pokediginut In reply to PuebloDoG62 [2011-10-10 02:34:42 +0000 UTC]
Tai: Yeah,. . .we'll make it out of this together.
I wasn't offended. Quite the opposite. I like it when you submit first. It was your first OC meme that inspired all of mine (And I still have people asking me to make more) Shoot, I wish I had a writing spot.
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