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Slithersoul [2011-10-07 20:31:53 +0000 UTC]
Wait wait wait you said Matt has hands, wouldn't they be paws if he were an Arcanine? You need to describe Matt better. Also, you should be more focusing on Matt discovering his new body, as you can't just be like "Oh yeah, I'm an Arcanine now, nothing big." He should really have focused on his body before or at the beginning of this chapter, it's something important that you left out.
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to Slithersoul [2011-10-09 20:32:58 +0000 UTC]
Also, I realize that I lost a bit of focus on the "new body" point, I kinda messed up a bit there. But, I also said that Matt is a bit in denial about the whole situation in one of my author comments (really not tryin to make an excuse here, just thought I'd note it). On a side note though, you've given me a good idea for a plot twist I can add a little later on; thank you👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Herodrake [2011-07-05 20:04:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm interested to see where this goes. Is this tied into one of your other stories or just a stand-alone thing?
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to Herodrake [2011-07-06 04:54:26 +0000 UTC]
This is a stand alone series that I thought about, but didn't think I would get around to it. I hope to keep both of my series going and on time but you know, life is complicated
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HumanPikachu [2011-06-22 16:26:36 +0000 UTC]
One can hope right? But, I really doubt it would be that easy Matt(Ray?).
Geez, I'm getting a headache trying to keep names straight...
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PuebloDoG62 In reply to HumanPikachu [2011-06-25 16:17:02 +0000 UTC]
sorry bout that, I couldn't think of another way to keep his identity secret and how to seperate the two
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HumanPikachu In reply to PuebloDoG62 [2011-06-25 16:23:39 +0000 UTC]
I can understand. But, it still mess's with me. Oh, well.
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pokediginut [2011-06-22 02:27:19 +0000 UTC]
Right, like he's gonna wake up and be human. Gligar is definetley a teen.
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