Comments: 14
PrismSky In reply to RainbowAurora [2012-09-23 16:33:29 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS CRITIQUE!
It was just PACKED with awesome information! You have quite a talent for constructive criticism!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
RainbowAurora In reply to PrismSky [2012-09-23 16:37:38 +0000 UTC]
haha, NOO PROBLEM!!! X3
lol, its weird because i usually dislike writing but i always get VERY positive feedback when i do X3
thanks, i try my best so that people can improve upon what i've told them <33
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
esmecelene [2012-09-29 00:03:07 +0000 UTC]
beautiful!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
liyaperfidious [2012-09-24 10:05:37 +0000 UTC]
You know, in most cases fuzzy lines are bad. But I don't know what magic you did, it looks fine here.
The colouring is smooth.
Maybe you could have coloured it a bit crisp at certain parts like where the hair covers certain parts of the skin.
But since it is sketchy, it is not that obvious.
The background is nice though.
Illusions of rose petals that defy gravity. Rekindling idyllic memories.
Those come to mind )
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ToxicTortillas [2012-09-20 23:20:22 +0000 UTC]
Silky hair... o3o
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
RainbowAurora [2012-09-20 22:59:38 +0000 UTC]
AHHH SO PRETTY!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
PrismSky In reply to RainbowAurora [2012-09-20 22:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
ANNDDD YAAAY I CAUGHT YOUR KIRIBAAAAN!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
RainbowAurora In reply to PrismSky [2012-09-20 23:02:50 +0000 UTC]
haha, sure!
OMG I KNOWWWWWWWW!!!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0