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Kiyori-Mikura [2009-10-25 20:05:27 +0000 UTC]
.///.; This reminds me of my boyfriend >///<; ... If you'd just color the hair blond and eyes green ..... Lol x//DDD;;. I'm not asking you to color it - u -;;. Don't listen to my earlier words about coloring x//D;; Haha xDD;;
Lol, it looks fine ^ ^. Though, you should make the eyes farther apart, use a ruler for lines, so it doesn't look messy, and work on your hands. The hands on the basketball are flat. If you use a ref, have someone hold a basketball exactly like that, you can see the fingers aren't flat :3. And by the way, the shorts kind of look like a skirt O//o;; >//<;; ... -arches an eyebrow- Is there a way to change that/a way you could (possibly) alter that?? That is, if you want to change it ^ ^;.
Lol, I love giving criticism on other people's art; I just love seeing the final product and it's so awesome because they improved it from listening to whatever I said Cx Heehee. Lol, you don't have to listen to me > u> ... I like this; this is faved ^ ^. If I drew this, I wouldn't even show it Dx;. Every time I draw something: after I'm done something, and I stare at it and stare at it, I start to see tons of flaws and then I won't even show it Dx -is a perfectionist-.
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PRINCESSROSE88 In reply to Kiyori-Mikura [2009-10-26 04:27:15 +0000 UTC]
critisism is awesome somehow. and ive actually always hated this pic! butttt i uploaded it anyway. (u leave long comments!)XD
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Kiyori-Mikura In reply to PRINCESSROSE88 [2009-10-29 01:57:31 +0000 UTC]
Lol - u -. Oh, really? o3o Haha, if I hate a pic, I wouldn't even scan it, let alone upload it on dA! I am quite hard on myself and am really quite bad at rough drafts, or just practicing (they'd look like equivalents to ... a child's doodle of a dinosaur (line art) [aka really bad, the young child has no artistic talent yet]) things. Like, just practicing how something looks like ... If someone sees that (I draw in my agenda and bring it to every class, and last year, I drew in my sketchbook, which I brought to every class ... and my friend would ask if she could look o x e), I'd go 'o - e' when I see that the page they're looking at is full of lines and shapes you really cannot call a drawing DDDDx. She never said anything; no one criticized my art, ever. I'm the only one o.o;; -blink, blink, hasn't realized that until now- ... Well, whatever, I'm enough to replace, like, three people DDx. If I go see my gallery, I grimace and heavily cringe at the work I don't deem as "good" o - e. T.T I only have only a small few works of art that are acceptable T x T;.
[Lol, yes, I do - u - ~]
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PRINCESSROSE88 In reply to Kiyori-Mikura [2009-10-31 05:09:20 +0000 UTC]
u must believe in ur talent more! Cause u have lots! (i sound cheesy sometimes)
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Kiyori-Mikura In reply to PRINCESSROSE88 [2009-11-09 00:28:12 +0000 UTC]
> 3 > ... -doesn't believe her-
(Ahahaha~ xD It's okay! xDD d)
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Shurikit In reply to PRINCESSROSE88 [2009-10-26 22:22:43 +0000 UTC]
You don't like it when I critisize you >_<
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Shurikit [2009-10-11 06:22:48 +0000 UTC]
You could have draw glasses on him or at least made him look like Mario.
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