Comments: 53
Aumih16 [2018-06-23 11:42:02 +0000 UTC]
beautiful! love it again!
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ManicMoonMan [2015-08-16 12:19:08 +0000 UTC]
One of my favorite shorts! I always love informed reticent complicity.
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ShadowFrost1 [2010-08-16 20:05:50 +0000 UTC]
Awesome
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NevermoreFox [2010-05-26 23:47:56 +0000 UTC]
and it ended how? teleportation?
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apsm [2010-05-26 08:00:47 +0000 UTC]
I sorta don't get the ending. I thought they said Jacob would turn back when he took the bikini off, but when he/she did, she remained a girl and everyone else around her transformed into a girl too.
Did I miss something?
Otherwise, it's an okay story.
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apsm In reply to Princess-Kay [2010-05-27 09:29:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Sorry, the way I read it, he'd just taken it off forcibly.
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Jam1900 [2010-05-26 04:23:09 +0000 UTC]
SEXY!!!! Have someone do a comic out of it. It would be so cool!
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blazikenking [2010-05-25 21:28:54 +0000 UTC]
oh, and
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blazikenking [2010-05-25 21:28:35 +0000 UTC]
very good, as usual
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InertialElement [2010-05-25 17:01:49 +0000 UTC]
Another awesome story.
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Princess-Kay In reply to foxpawsd [2010-05-29 05:16:05 +0000 UTC]
Um... I'm the one who gives the prize.
It was my contest. She was just featuring the poll.
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capricornamy [2010-05-25 13:59:38 +0000 UTC]
Your an excellent writer! (Bikini Line - TG)
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daddyslittlejanegirl [2010-05-25 13:24:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm always a fan of this kind of literature. Good work.
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Godendag [2010-05-25 07:40:43 +0000 UTC]
Let's get it right this time
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Godendag [2010-05-25 07:39:09 +0000 UTC]
:clapplz:
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