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Published: 2012-09-03 20:30:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 238; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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EDIT - Found time to majorly change her eyes and muzzle. Better?

Today on the first day of my last year in school, some girl in my tutor group proclaimed that it's her birthday tomorrow. I took it upon myself as a challenge to whip up something for her in as little time as possible, given I had just one work-laden afternoon in which to get it done.

Damn that mane Pinkie Pie, damn it to Tartarus and back. told me her mane is basically the hardest thing to draw in ponydom...

I feel unhappy with this, especially as it was a rush job, but I'm not sure what exactly is so off-putting about it. Her right eye for one thing, and her mane's loops and swirls for another. More thoughts anyone?

Again I've limited the fullview to 1024px but hit download for the original scan which is more than 4.5x bigger

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Comments: 14

GyilokHUN [2012-10-08 12:34:32 +0000 UTC]

D'aaaaaaw

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dragonrace [2012-10-08 00:14:56 +0000 UTC]

aw cute!

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10art1 [2012-09-03 21:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Good job. The eyes, however, throw me off. They need to be bigger. Not bad though, it comes with experience.

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PonyProse In reply to 10art1 [2012-09-04 04:42:52 +0000 UTC]

That might be what it is. Will remember next time

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10art1 In reply to PonyProse [2012-09-04 20:15:02 +0000 UTC]

mmh still your eyes are off... :/ they are too round, need to be more ovally and pointing towards the ears not the top of the head

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PonyProse In reply to 10art1 [2012-09-05 18:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely. This was the best I could do in the time I had though, I was unable to make the oval shape work for some reason. At least this is an improvement (I think) and the girl was very happy with it, it made her day

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10art1 In reply to PonyProse [2012-09-05 19:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Well then that's all what matters ^.^ good job

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PonyProse In reply to 10art1 [2012-09-05 20:02:46 +0000 UTC]

BTW, did that boost arrive okay?

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10art1 In reply to PonyProse [2012-09-05 20:32:10 +0000 UTC]

you gave me that extension?

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PonyProse In reply to 10art1 [2012-09-05 21:15:25 +0000 UTC]

I could have sworn I told it to tell you I did, and include a little message. Well if that didn't work, here's a screenshot of an email I received recently [link]

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10art1 In reply to PonyProse [2012-09-05 21:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you so much ^.^ and I did recieve an email and a message but it was all listed as anonymous so Dori-to and I were batting back and forth who it might be. Seriously dude it means a lot to me that you would help me out like this ^.^

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PonyProse In reply to 10art1 [2012-09-06 15:36:40 +0000 UTC]

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Fire-seeker [2012-09-03 21:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Dammit Pinkie, I just fixed the wall after last time! D:

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PonyProse In reply to Fire-seeker [2012-09-04 04:41:03 +0000 UTC]

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