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Poet64 — I don't know
Published: 2009-01-20 18:24:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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What's happening,why am I here?
This down,
low place.
I'm always angry,
at nothing.
Always depressed,
for no reason.
How could this be happening?
Why is this happening?
Everything was fine,
'till this feeling came along.
I was happy,
'till this blue cloud settled.
I wish I could explain to you,
what's going on inside my head.
But I can't describe the feeling,
that has taken over me.
I was angry,
then I was sad.
This is stupid,
why am I explaining.
You can't hear my screams,
I've locked them all inside.
Maybe that's why this is happening,
everything inside is starting to fight the barrier.
The wall so carefully,
and cautiously put up.
Your breaking it,
and everything wants out.
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What do you think I'm trying to say, cause I don't know.
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Ok now your stories are getting mixed up, cause in your artists comments you said you were trying to tell me something. (unless the "you" in this case wasn't me but it almost always is)
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I'm asking questions in that poem do you have the answers can you see deep enough into my writing to figure out what I'm trying to say? I need answers and I can't find them, hell I barely no the questions.
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I see a message but I am not sure I see questions. I see you asking why, but I'm not sure if that is what you want me to tell you or if that is something you are asking yourself.
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And what's the message you see? I guess the question is mostly directed at me.
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The message I see is letting me know that you are angry and depressed. The question is; why? Because you don't know. That's what I see.
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Well then I guess you got the right message
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yay me! Now that I get the message, waht are you planning to do about it?
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How can I plan to do something about something if I don't know why or what the something is?
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You said I got the message right: YOu're angry and depressed. Now you need to figure out why, and when you know why, you can make the problem go away. It's like a revised Scientific Method.
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You asked what I planned to do about it: until I figure out why there is no plan.
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Ok how do you plan to figure out why?
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There isn't a plan I'm hoping it will come to me
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oh okay big difference *eyeroll*
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Then it fits that you boogie, because you are just so much cooler then me.
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I'm not cooler then you and I never said which one was cooler
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Yes you are, and boogying just sounds cooler because it's more full of life then "dance"
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I'll take that as a compliment, thank you
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YOu should, because I love you jsut the way you are (geez how cliche` is that?)
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I love you too (cliche' is romantic so it doesn't matter)
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Yeah you make a good point there
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