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Poet64 — Her suicide
Published: 2009-01-14 00:26:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 224; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description I watched her as it happened, as she took her last breath before the leap of her life or the end of it. I tryed to talk her out of it to reason with her but it was impossible she wouldn't hear it. She had many reasons to keep living so many reasons, but at that moment in time those reasons didn't matter to her.
   I had been at the hospital the day before, I had a really horrible virus and I over heard doctors talking, one was talking about her. She had come in a few days before, she had been feeling ill, they had told her they would call with results in a week. I heard the answer then and there, she was pregnant.
  I stood there with the reason racing through my mind and never told her, I know she would have listened to me then, she would have thought twice about life.
She had always imagined having a child, being a mother. I let her fall to her death full well knowing she had a true reason to live.
  She died and I feel as if I murdered her.
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Comments: 29

Axel-legend37 [2010-01-28 00:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was really good. It's kinda sad though. Your a great writer

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Poet64 In reply to Axel-legend37 [2010-01-28 00:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks And for faving

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Rocker310 [2010-01-11 01:24:47 +0000 UTC]

I am speechless!

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Poet64 In reply to Rocker310 [2010-01-11 01:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Is that good or bad??

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Rocker310 In reply to Poet64 [2010-01-11 01:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Neither. . . it's GREAT!

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Poet64 In reply to Rocker310 [2010-01-11 01:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Rocker310 In reply to Poet64 [2010-01-11 01:29:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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Poet64 In reply to Rocker310 [2010-01-11 01:32:16 +0000 UTC]

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KM-Rasco [2009-01-14 00:38:13 +0000 UTC]

well written.

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Poet64 In reply to KM-Rasco [2009-01-14 00:40:43 +0000 UTC]

You think so? personally I thought it stunk

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KM-Rasco In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Some of my own work I think stinks my viewers like .

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Poet64 In reply to KM-Rasco [2009-01-14 00:50:34 +0000 UTC]

You have a good point there

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KM-Rasco In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:53:51 +0000 UTC]

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annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:28:19 +0000 UTC]

And again I notice the size difference between your writing in the notebook and typing it on the computer.

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:30:05 +0000 UTC]

Would you just comment on the story itself and forget about the writing cause I can't remember what you said during school.

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annoyingtwin089 In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Um.. I said "I really hope this is fiction" you said "yes" and I said "thank god" and you said if someone had actually killed themselves you'd be in a much worse state then you were in.

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay so that wasn't really criticism, criticise!!!!!!

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annoyingtwin089 In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:35:30 +0000 UTC]

You're one to talk, you never leave me comments. I like critique, too.

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:38:20 +0000 UTC]

There is nothing to criticise yours are to damn good

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annoyingtwin089 In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:40:11 +0000 UTC]

I disagree. Everyone has something they can improve on.

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:41:03 +0000 UTC]

I just don't see where youneed to improve

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annoyingtwin089 In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Ass kissing will not help you here.

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Who's ass kissing

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annoyingtwin089 In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:46:03 +0000 UTC]

What would you call that?

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Complimenting to an extreme

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annoyingtwin089 In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:54:06 +0000 UTC]

*eyeroll* You say potatoe....

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-14 00:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Yea pretty much

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annoyingtwin089 In reply to Poet64 [2009-01-14 00:55:45 +0000 UTC]

*eyeroll*

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Poet64 In reply to annoyingtwin089 [2009-01-15 22:20:30 +0000 UTC]

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