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hunnyclover [2015-01-25 13:08:17 +0000 UTC]

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The funny thing is that I've got like really nothing bad to say about this, so I hope this "critique" is something you can work with haha e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

The position is awesome with the little shortenings in the right hand of him. Fingers are drawed nice, only the Hand which is holding the sword seems...to have a finger to much huh? well the other hand to- it shall be like that? okay! but though that the hand holding the sword seems a little bit too flat.

But enough with that. The colours are fitting so nice! The blue of his outfit (WHICH IS SO AWESOME MADE) stays in a nice contrast to his hair.

The thing I like the most is his face. His eyes are done in a nice style and I am just in love with his haircut..... But to the outlines: the outlines in his face and hair are so nice light and are not overwelming the whole thing, fitting nice into this picture. I am inlove with this little red shadow on his nose and his ears <3

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AuPlauSe In reply to hunnyclover [2015-01-25 18:58:18 +0000 UTC]

I agree with this critique

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hunnyclover In reply to AuPlauSe [2015-01-25 19:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Piromanova In reply to hunnyclover [2015-01-25 13:37:39 +0000 UTC]

this character is not mine) and he has 6 fingers. I dont know how to draw them well (

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hunnyclover In reply to Piromanova [2015-01-25 13:47:54 +0000 UTC]

OKay, I totally understand that....I am right now working on a pic. with a couple seamesic twins and .... I can't do it

But it is nice!!!!

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AuPlauSe In reply to hunnyclover [2015-01-25 20:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Correction, it is Siamese twins.

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hunnyclover In reply to AuPlauSe [2015-01-25 21:08:41 +0000 UTC]

i can't write proper english

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AuPlauSe In reply to hunnyclover [2015-01-26 12:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Really?

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hunnyclover In reply to AuPlauSe [2015-01-26 13:37:27 +0000 UTC]

as you can see haha

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AuPlauSe In reply to hunnyclover [2015-01-26 17:13:52 +0000 UTC]

You know, if you want, I could help. Is that ok?

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hunnyclover In reply to AuPlauSe [2015-01-26 18:49:47 +0000 UTC]

nahhh please don't, that won't end well

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AuPlauSe In reply to hunnyclover [2015-02-08 01:20:38 +0000 UTC]

how come?

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hunnyclover In reply to AuPlauSe [2015-02-08 13:51:02 +0000 UTC]

not constructive enough...and this is right sadly XD

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