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Alright. Comments on it so far:

The anatomy is...off. The legs are far too skinny, unless that's your style. I suggest looking through magazines and coping some poses from there. It helps a lot with anatomy.

Cute style. You might want to thicken the legs up a tad bit. Just to make it look more 'correct' with the way the face is designed. The knees are positioned too far up the legs. The feet are off as well. The shoulder looks disjointed as well. The face is well drawn and cute.

Cute! The character looks way too tall and skinny, but it really fits the style of the piece, so I like it! The only critique I can think of is that your lines are a bit messy, but it's just a small thing.

ALRIGHT! Now it be your turn to give me advice.

I actually do like this picture a little bit.

If you don't know who this is by now, you are shot.

Same texture I used on "Love or Lust" and the same program... But this time with a tablet.

Goes with this:[link]

Nao my ID, because... I suppose my character is suppose to be me.. I just changed the gender and culture and looks.

Description
Alright. Comments on it so far:

The anatomy is...off. The legs are far too skinny, unless that's your style. I suggest looking through magazines and coping some poses from there. It helps a lot with anatomy.

Cute style. You might want to thicken the legs up a tad bit. Just to make it look more 'correct' with the way the face is designed. The knees are positioned too far up the legs. The feet are off as well. The shoulder looks disjointed as well. The face is well drawn and cute.

Cute! The character looks way too tall and skinny, but it really fits the style of the piece, so I like it! The only critique I can think of is that your lines are a bit messy, but it's just a small thing.

ALRIGHT! Now it be your turn to give me advice.

I actually do like this picture a little bit.

If you don't know who this is by now, you are shot.

Same texture I used on "Love or Lust" and the same program... But this time with a tablet.

Goes with this:[link]

Nao my ID, because... I suppose my character is suppose to be me.. I just changed the gender and culture and looks.