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pinali — Alter 2.P04
Published: 2010-10-02 15:30:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 880; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 10
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Ugh, right, finally.
Hasn't been checked by my awesome editor *kelinor so there might be a few things that get polished up later. Until then, here we go.Next
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heeey, great expressions. I do personally think, though, that you might make Eli's mouth in the final panel bigger. I mean, that exression usually does stretch the mouth a little, drawing the mouth wider across makes it just that little bit more convincing. In my opinion. Just as a note of warning, I am newer at this than you; I have about one half of your experience.
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waiiit. does the enemy guy look like his commander? maybe there's a whole freaking NEST of duplicates!!! O_@ ZOMG
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That's a creepy thought indeed!
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I'mma do this. I'mma save up all the notifications I get from your artwork, and then I'mma read the chapter all at once. I can't take this anymoooooore
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Fair enough.
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....Oops Eli 
Eli's "Oh snap......" expression in the last panel- Priceless!
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Big trouble. What gonna happen?!
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He's gonna get in TROUBLE.
I sense it.
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Why'd she move the curtain I wonder....Hrm....
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Just privacy reasons I guess, patients sometimes don't wanna be stared at by random people, haha
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Oh...Yeah....Prolly a good reason. ><;
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Looking real good.. you got great flow on the page. you show the "oh shit, i'm screwed" scene so well.
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Oh gosh, I hope he's good at feigning memory loss. D:
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