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Pick-Me-a-Rose [2019-05-30 14:21:48 +0000 UTC]
The imagery is awesome here! I'm intrigued to learn more about him; he seems like a pretty tragic character!
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PhoxnSparky In reply to Pick-Me-a-Rose [2019-06-02 05:01:13 +0000 UTC]
It's a pretty grim image, it's like he's looking at the face of what he has become. This guy is going to play a pretty interesting role in the story. I'm thinking about writing a side story about him so you can learn more about the Empire of Unity and such, plus his character arcs would make a interesting plot!
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MasterDoodleJoe80062 [2019-05-11 05:28:55 +0000 UTC]
Don't do it Ben! ..... oh.... wait.... he already did.
Don't KEEP doing it Ben!
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AlexVanArsdale [2019-05-09 14:33:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh man this is just so good! The description and the grim imagery! This just hits home so well. Poor guy. I feel for him but we all make bad choices. Wither we stick to them or not is up to our hearts.
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PhoxnSparky In reply to AlexVanArsdale [2019-05-09 21:17:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Yeah, he's most definitely attempting to stick out his choices, but can he veer off them?
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MercenaryBlade [2019-05-07 05:30:54 +0000 UTC]
Fine character concept, what a tortured soul
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C-E-Smith [2019-05-07 03:03:31 +0000 UTC]
what's more chivalrous, going home to take care of your family or fighting for a distant government that demands blood lust? This guy needs to do some serious re-thinking of his life choices
you set the mood perfectly, I love the rain coming down through the hole... looks like he is a fugitive, poor fellowย
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PhoxnSparky In reply to C-E-Smith [2019-05-07 03:18:35 +0000 UTC]
He's most definitely thinking about the family life he could of had in this image amongst the carnage he just brought about. Now it's too late so he's really set in his ways. Yep, he's ruined.... maybe something can bring him out of it... maybe.
Thanks! That's the exactly the look I was trying to capture, like he's caged.
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C-E-Smith In reply to PhoxnSparky [2019-05-07 15:59:00 +0000 UTC]
the only person who can save him is himself!ย
He does look like he is in a cage! A self-inflicted prison!
The way he is holding his helmet reminds me a little of Hamlet!
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PhoxnSparky In reply to C-E-Smith [2019-05-08 13:12:44 +0000 UTC]
You've got that right.
Haha it does! He's also staring at the faceless mask thinking about the humanity he loss.
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Rebel-Rider [2019-05-06 18:20:21 +0000 UTC]
The dude should desert.ย
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PhoxnSparky In reply to Rebel-Rider [2019-05-06 20:24:53 +0000 UTC]
Most people would if they found themselves in his spot, but he is different than most. He knows what he and his empire is doing is evil, but he feels it is necessary for the universe to be cleansed and is sacrificing himself. It would be a monumental task to persuade him to come to good side because he already knows he's in the wrong.
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Rebel-Rider In reply to PhoxnSparky [2019-05-06 20:28:17 +0000 UTC]
It's a lot harder to convince someone who is aware they are evil than convince someone who thinks they're on the right side.
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PhoxnSparky In reply to Rebel-Rider [2019-05-07 00:50:35 +0000 UTC]
It is. I really don't know how you would go about it, especially someone like him.
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Rebel-Rider In reply to PhoxnSparky [2019-05-07 00:55:02 +0000 UTC]
He has issues.ย
(I think it's your turn in the RP.)
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