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photofreak07 — The Time to Give

Published: 2010-02-06 20:51:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 985; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Description "Sometimes I cannot forgive
these days, mercy cuts so deep
If the world was how it should be,
Maybe I could get some sleep
While I lay, I dream we're better,
Scales were gone and faces light
When we wake, we hate our brother
We still move to hurt each other
Sometimes I can close my eyes,
all the fear that keeps me silent
Falls below my heavy breathing,
What makes me so badly bent?
We all have a chance to murder
We all feel the need for wonder
We still want to be reminded
That the pain is worth the plunder"



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Comments: 9

mnasser [2010-02-26 16:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Great shot!!

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photofreak07 In reply to mnasser [2010-02-26 18:39:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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FourCG [2010-02-07 04:00:22 +0000 UTC]

This is one of the many reasons why I love spontaneous street photography !

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ArtByASmith [2010-02-07 02:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully heartwrenching...greath work

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PEN-at-Work [2010-02-07 01:11:53 +0000 UTC]

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photofreak07 In reply to PEN-at-Work [2010-02-07 14:25:47 +0000 UTC]

things got sunny on the hemisphere

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VintageIsabel [2010-02-06 22:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Very much appreciate this one. The lines following the picture are so heart-wrenching, and perfect in connection to the photograph. Well done.

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photofreak07 In reply to VintageIsabel [2010-02-06 22:55:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks isabel, as always it's a great pleasure and delight to read your feedback... maybe you would like to get a little more critiquY on me so i don't get too puffed

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VintageIsabel In reply to photofreak07 [2010-02-06 23:01:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Well. I will do that only when I feel I can give valuable advice because I am an amazing photographer. Which hasn't happened yet. I'm still in an admiring and humble stage, not too jaded. -Hannah

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