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phillyzero — The Apple
Published: 2007-07-31 00:38:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1897; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 39
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Still working on animation, and I know I do a lot of head scratches lol. Appley goodness, enjoy.Related content
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kiss your hand five times, post this on 10 other things, look under your pillow and you will see a pink ipod
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After he eats the apples and jumps...its so cute
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I agree with both ~FriendFrog and ^livius . But overall, though, it's fun to watch! I really like your shading style, too.
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I love headscratches, they're adorable. 
I have a few suggestions for you. First, I think his shifty eyes shift too fast. Maybe you should slow them down a little? And when he enters, it looks like one of the frames is out of order, because he kinda jumps in and out. Lastly, you might want to think about making it loop, so the emote continues smoothly. For example, if you had him exit to the right, he could eventually come to the apple, instead of having it appear again out of thin air. Maybe it's just me, but I think emotes are always cooler when they loop.
Heh, that was a long comment, but hopefully it was helpful. Keep up the great work!
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Thanks very much for that helpful comment, I just realised you were correct, about a little mishap at the start. I'll see if should try and tween or just add more time for the frames.
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It's all fun and games until you get kicked out of Eden.
Good job so far, philly. I think the apple needs some shading too. It looks a little flat next to the shiny blue fellow.
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Thanks for the great comment, I'll keep working on the other objects and their coloring ^_^
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